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  • Ryan Crombie
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    You have a really nice little story here! With a bit of polishing around the edges you could be on to a real winner. Write something else that is set in the same fantasy world as this and I'll be sure to read it. Keep up the good work.
    A Knight Without the Shining Armor
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    A young man wishes to become a knight, but first maybe he ought to take lessons.
  • Ryan Crombie

    mumbled "My new novel - The Insurrection of Shadow "

    If you haven't already had a read why not do so now! I've just aded a nw chapter too. Bare in mind this is still a work in progress!
    Here is the synopsis - Peace has prevailed amongst the provinces of elves for the last two centuries since the defeat of the Darksin elf anarchists, who sought to reign supreme over all other beings. Embers of those beliefs have remained since the defeat many moons ago, however due to the recent heavy handed treatment of the darksin races, those beliefs are resurfacing across the southern provinces and whispers of a revolt is at the tip of many elven tongues. Meanwhile the realms of men are faced with their own threat as a new seperatist faction subversive to the crown begin to sow its seeds of influence.
    Victoria Raven
    2 years ago
    Ooooo!!!! I like it!!!
    glad-or-sad
    2 years ago
    Yh me as well :)
    Ryan Crombie
    2 years ago
    Gald you like! Hope you stick around
  • Ryan Crombie
    Love it! The concept and idea is brilliant and your quality of writing is generally pretty good too. Just minor things here and there but nothing that damages the delivery of the story and can be improved with exprience! I don't know what kind of tone you are going for is a more light book or you going for something more serious and sinister. Think it could work really well with the latter but hey I'm not here to tell you how to write your story. Are you a fan of Fringe the tv show at all? Sounds right uo your street, I'm a huge fan myself and you should check it out if you havn't aleady!
    Endgame
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    Let me tell you something: you know history, you live in it every day. But you don't know the future. But there are people who do, people who are shaping it right now. All you have to do is wait, and the...
    Ryan Crombie
    2 years ago
    Have a watch exactly your kind of thing!
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