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  • nostomanias
    2 years agoReply
    Aw, such a short update. Good, though. Thank you! :)
    Sorry I haven't been around much.... I'm more on wp than movellas, generally, but I'm trying to do a bit of both.
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    Lily Blake has always moved around from place to place. Her mother, Cassie, hates to talk about her past and Lily's father. Everything changes when Cassie mysteriously moves then back to the town of Chance...
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    It's okay, I mean you can't be on all the time!
  • nostomanias
    2 years agoReply
    Sorry, I'm super behind with this....
    Did you... Is Cassie... THANK YOU SO MUCH! That's so sweet of you, wow. :) I loved this story before, but twice as much now.
    Katerina Dursley
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    Katerina Dursley is the daughter of Dudley and Melanie Dursley. When Kat is eleven she gets a strange letter from a school called Hogwarts. How will Kat deal with the fact that she's a witch? How will...
    nostomanias
    2 years ago
    They Spell Trouble: Ooh, an antagonist. Very nice. And she's a Riddle girl? Interesting....
    I'm very impressed by Kat's ability to do potions so well, despite being a muggleborn and all that. She'll make a fine witch yet. :)
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    Yes she is a Riddle girl....but I'm not sure if I want her to be a RIDDLE....
    And I though she would be good at potions, and everything but bad at transfiguration.... is that a good idea?
    Oh and your welcome! Besides I like your name anyway :)
    I'll be updating soon! I have like three projects right now though (two in history!!!)

    WOW this is a lot....overload!
  • nostomanias
    2 years agoReply
    My New Home:
    Yus! Favouriting this! :D
    Bit of a character overload, but I think I can deal with it... I'm intrigued by Lizzie, what's she like? Quiet, shy, arrogant? And Ian - is he polite, a bit of an idiot, really kind? I want to get to know these people!
    Now, a bit of a problem I can relate to. Pace. The story flows, but really fast. Unfortunately, I don't know of any way to fix this as I have this problem in my own writing. All I can think of is re-reading, preferably out loud, and adding more words to slow it down a bit. I don't know if that will help - have an experiment, tweak bits, practice writing really slow, dramatic scenes to challenge yourself maybe? If you find a way to fix it, I'd love to know about it. :)
    But it's really a minor issue, because I love this story! Don't leave me hanging! Even if it's just for me, please keep posting this because I am really intrigued as to what the heck is going to become of all this.
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    Lily Blake has always moved around from place to place. Her mother, Cassie, hates to talk about her past and Lily's father. Everything changes when Cassie mysteriously moves then back to the town of Chance...
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    Okay, I can do that! And I think as it goes on it will get slower, I just didn't want her to find out she was a witch in the middle of the story... And thanks for favoriting!
    nostomanias
    2 years ago
    No problem. :)
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    I'm working on an update...slowly...
  • nostomanias
    2 years agoReply
    Chance Harbour:
    Whoa, a sudden start, there. But not too confusing.
    I like it. I like the lyrics being interwoven with the story (though it does detract from the non-lyric bits slightly) and reflecting her mood.
    Also, liking the mysteriousness of her mother. Very good, some unanswered questions already. O.o
    Overall: awesome. :)
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    Lily Blake has always moved around from place to place. Her mother, Cassie, hates to talk about her past and Lily's father. Everything changes when Cassie mysteriously moves then back to the town of Chance...
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    YAY!!! Comments!
  • nostomanias
    2 years agoReply
    That sounds like such a beautiful wand... Wonderfully described, well done. :)
    It's interesting how Kat is so like Harry in her reactions to things. Maybe because they both came to Diagon Alley under similar circumstances.
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    Katerina Dursley is the daughter of Dudley and Melanie Dursley. When Kat is eleven she gets a strange letter from a school called Hogwarts. How will Kat deal with the fact that she's a witch? How will...
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    That's actually a really good idea! Thanks! :)
    nostomanias
    2 years ago
    No problem. :)
    Josienee 2001
    2 years ago
    I do feel like Hogwarts and the potter's will show her theses more to life then materialistic things...
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