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  • Torn By choices
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  • ruchix
    5 years agoReply
    You should take care of the punctuation and the proper nouns should have the 1st letter capital.
    It's good so far ! :)
    the boy who lived next door
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    Hi my name is Alice and i have lived in England for 3 years i used to live in America. I moved here from America because of a break up with my ex boyfriend, I know it sounds stupid flying all the way...
    lillsash
    5 years ago
    yeah thank you x :)
  • ruchix
    5 years agoReply
    I loved this. You wrote it beautifully and I could feel the emotions... good job!
    Until death do us part
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    A short story that I've been working on for this competition. I really hope you like it! 'I have been on this earth for only a mere moment, but soon I shall be gone for an eternity. But, even when...
    Beth...
    4 years ago
    thank you so much!
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