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  • Rubina11
    4 years agoReply
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    Ok I know I am super late but I never got around to commenting until now lol.... but
    OMG!!! THIS WAS JDSHFUDHFIOJD AMAZING!!! SERIOUSLY THE BEST FANFIC EVER!!! Like no lie! I loved it!! There's so many things I want to say about it but I don't want to make a really long comment!!! I'll start on the last chapter! AHHHHH!! it was perfect! I liked how it was in the future and you wrote about everyone's life! But most importantly I liked how you made it so that they meet together on their 10 year anniversary to celebrate together and they made a huge deal about it and it was special to them! I hope they do that because it was so beautiful!! If they do only 7 years to go ;) lol It made me laugh and cry! It was the BEST ending ever!!! And the whole thing overall was so amazing! I laughed so much ( especially the part between them meeting Belle and to where her and Louis say they have feelings for each other after she punches Harry. That whole part of the story was my favorite and I can read it all the time!!!) It made me cry and it made me feel so many things I can't explain! lol I have read a couple of Fan Fics here and there, and let me say, your writing skills are amazing! Other people stories get boring, or they aren't going anywhere after a while, or they make the main girl so stupid and a slut sleeping with all the boys. But yours was so FAR from that! It was soooo amazing! Keep it up! <3 You seriously wrote the BEST Fan Fic about One Direction ever!!! :D
    Breaking Free
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    Ever felt smothered by everyone else's idea of what your life should be like? Have you ever just wanted to say "Stop! It's my life!" to those closest to you? We all have, haven't we? I bet you were too...
    directioner04
    4 years ago
    Sorry it took me so long to read this, I've been on a 'fanfic hiatus' you could say. But this was the sweetest comment ever, it just made my whole day! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, that makes me really happy :) Thanks again, you're so sweet!
  • Rubina11
    4 years agoReply
    Ahhhh I honestly don't know how to feel. :( I mean, I am always rooting for niall to get the girl BC I feel like he's the underdog. But in this story I want it to be Louis. Like idk how to explain it but I feel like it will always be louis for belle. Nialls cute with belle but for me its still Louis. But now its like the story can't change to go back to Louis BC that would just be so messed up. Idk I'm so confused on this, and even tho belle and niall are cute, it will always be Louis and belle to me. And ahhhh harry and Kylie that's just too cute!!!! :D even tho I'm confused on how I feel about belle's decisions its still an amazing story and my favorite!!! :D
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    Ever felt smothered by everyone else's idea of what your life should be like? Have you ever just wanted to say "Stop! It's my life!" to those closest to you? We all have, haven't we? I bet you were too...
    Rubina11
    4 years ago
    Kaylie**
    directioner04
    4 years ago
    Haha I'm sorry you're conflicted but don't worry, this story is FAR from over, lots of other events are up ahead ;)
  • Rubina11
    4 years agoReply
    SERIOUSLY!! This is like the best fan fic I have ever read!!! I love it!!!! It's my favorite!! :D Update soon pleaseee!! haha :D
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    Ever felt smothered by everyone else's idea of what your life should be like? Have you ever just wanted to say "Stop! It's my life!" to those closest to you? We all have, haven't we? I bet you were too...
    directioner04
    4 years ago
    Aw thanks so much! I'll update as soon as I can :)
  • Rubina11
    5 years agoReply
    No don't end it!!! It would be cool if you had her sit down and have a conversation with Niall and have him explain his feelings for her, why he stayed with her at the hospital the entire time she was there and why he would ditch her for another girl at the party. Not saying that I want her to end up with Niall, it would just be nice to have an explanation about him since he was kind of cut out immediately without them talking about it. Idk it's just my opinion lol Other than that, it's a great story!!!!!! :D
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    All Bethany wanted was to find love again but ever since she was bullied all through out high school no guy ever wanted to come near her. When she would go home her dad would just yell at her for anything...
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