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  • Robz99

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    4 years agoReply
    I'd really appriciate it if people would comment on some of my work and let me know what you think...most the criticisms I get at home and school is positive, but I'd like to know how I can improve, so I can set my sights as high as possible, and maybe one day, get my work on the shelves. It's a dream I've had since I was little, and it would really help me out if people would comment ways I could get better. I'll look at any movellas people want me to, providing I have time (last time I agreed to this it was 39 chapters long and took me well over an hour), and I'll leave ways to improve, if I can find any. Thanks everyone :-)
    tallulahflanjee
    4 years ago
    I've done two but I really need to get to sleep soon. Please could you take a look at Occupational Hazard, it's three chapters, 20 mins worth, I just really want to get to 500 reads....
  • Robz99
    4 years agoReply
    Please leave some feedback....it would really help me out ;)
    Story of My Life
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    I know most people write stories about crushes and love lives, boyfriends and girlfriends, but I wonder how many people actually write their stories as these things are happening to them. I'm 14 years...
  • Robz99
    4 years agoReply
    So....sad..sniffle :'(
    The Hogwarts Games
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    Winner of the Crossover Competition! *_* I decided to combine two of my favourite fandoms - Harry Potter and Hunger Games to come up with - The Hogwarts Games! I've tried to pick up the story of Harry...
  • Robz99
    4 years agoReply
    I really love the Hunger Games and Harry Potter, and this is amazing....one thing though.....isnt Rose James and Albus' cousin, not sister? ;-)
    The Hogwarts Games
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    Winner of the Crossover Competition! *_* I decided to combine two of my favourite fandoms - Harry Potter and Hunger Games to come up with - The Hogwarts Games! I've tried to pick up the story of Harry...
    Chetna
    4 years ago
    Thanks :) Yes, Rose is...did I confuse that anywhere? I'm sorry if I did, I probably didn't notice. Since cousins are technically siblings, I might have forgotten to mention at places... sorry if I confused you! And thanks for reading xD
  • Robz99
    4 years agoReply
    This is awesome-like the next Harry Potter book! I will keep on reading this when you update, I really want to know what happens!
    The Diary of a Magical Muggleborn
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    I was minding my own business one day at home, sipping my favorite lemon tea, when the strangest thing happened. An owl flew in through the open window and dropped a piece of parchment onto the couch beside...
    RosaBella
    4 years ago
    Thank you! :)
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