FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 25 Jan 13Age 21Last online 2 months ago

I'm Robs and I love writing because it lets me escape from my boring life as a teenager in Wales and allows me to slip into realms full of mystery, danger, romance and friendship.

I'll return all likes, comments views and fans if you ask!

  • Saving Coralie.
    Saving Coralie.
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  • Delilah
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  • Robs

    I'll read yours if you read mine

    2 months agoReply
    Hey guys, willing to read and comment on anything anyone's got if you could give my story a read in return. Doesn't have to be all of it, just a few chapters or something!

    Saving Coralie.Coralie and Erin are more like sisters and friends. They've been through everything together, the good the bad and the ugly. Which is why when Coralie...


    Thanks.
    Robs
  • Robs
    3 years agoReply
    This is such a good start and I can so relate to this. You can already tell that this story is going to be deep and meaningful instead of some artificial love story. Keep up the good work!
    Maniac
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    The first rule you're taught when you agree to a job at a suicide hotline is to always act understanding and empathetic towards your 'clients', regardless of your own emotions. The second rule is to never...
  • Robs
    3 years agoReply
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    This is such a good story line! The only thing I think I'll say is that in the first chapter I think that you should inject a bit more emotion after she finds out her mum was murdered, as well as when she says goodbye to her best friend. If they were really as close as you imply, then wouldn't they actually cry at the prospect of living 10 hours away from each other, not just pretend to? Just some things to think about:) Otherwise its great!
    The Last Time
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    Olivia Santos moves to a small town to live with her father after her mother was murdered. He has a new family now, and Olivia hates him for getting to start again. After a while she needs to escape, and...
  • Robs
    3 years agoReply
    I like the idea for this story because its so relevant to our contemporary society, when singers and band members are basically becoming idols and gods in the eyes of their fans and have to leave their normal lives behind. Well written so far!
    Tired Eyes
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    This is a fan fiction about SayWeCanFly but it can be read by anyone. Ricki is happily in love with her boyfriend Braden. He is a musician and singer who plays small concerts every week. As Braden goes...
  • Robs
    3 years agoReply
    This was so inventive and well written! Nice to see something different
    A Walk of Reunion
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    An illustrated poem about my reunion with a city very close to my heart.
    Tohpi
    3 years ago
    Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it!
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