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  • RobH.49
    2 years agoReply
    I like the start! I love the way you've just left me wanting more. Can't wait for the next part - its gripping!
    Dowter or Princess?
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    Meredith a 16 year old would have had the pride to represent her planet, but is she ready to discover the truth and still do what she has been trained to do since an early age? She will have to find her...

  • RobH.49
    2 years agoReply
    Ah, it seems like the rare species of males on movellas has grown by one... (me if your wondering!)
    .Robbie.
    2 years ago
    Aldrin the executioner?
    Aldrin
    2 years ago
    More like "Aldrin the Bounty Hunter" - of guys who mistreat girls by only see them for sexual desires, kind of. XD

    - Aldrin
    RobH.49
    2 years ago
    I have been warned...
  • RobH.49
    2 years agoReply
    Wow - this is great! No wonder you got an A. Thats a whole load of action and description you packed in to 1000 words. Will you be adding more? Or is it just the 1000 words?
    Search and Destroy - (Eng Lan 1000 Creative Writing Assignment)
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    A story I had written for my 1000 word writing essay. It got an A, so I thought I might as well publish what I had here.
    Aldrin
    2 years ago
    Well... I might be. This was initially meant to be just a small little story.

    I wanted to incorporate fire fights in this story, but I didn't see a window to.

    - Aldrin
    RobH.49
    2 years ago
    Okay - great story either way.
  • RobH.49
    2 years agoReply
    Wow! I really like this story so far. It is fast paced, interesting and I love the names! I cannot wait for a bit more.
    Something I would say is that maybe add a little more description - it is mainly dialogue based (not that thats a bad thing, its just this setting could lend itself to description as well). Also, there are the typos, but I'm not too bothered.
    Keep going with this - its brilliant!
    Written In The Stars
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    There was a message for him, for the king. Lafera Heid was to deliver it.
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