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  • Robert Soames
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    I enjoyed this. Well done with finding the rhyming words. Perhaps add a little punctuation. Is it 'has gone' at the close?
    Human Interferance
    Human Interferance
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    This is a message as well as a poem, about global warming and the damage the human race has done to the world. hope you enjoy!
  • Robert Soames
    Really enjoyed it, whizzing through the 'ages' of life and I liked the way you declare your own death in the final verse, "I'm gone from flesh now". Thx
    Child You Will Grow
    Child You Will Gro...
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    This is the first poem i wrote, which was when i was 12. I was inspired by my baby sister who had taken her first steps just a few days beforehand. Please no hate :3
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