FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 3 Jun 12Age 23Last online 1 years ago

My name is Ellie, I hope with all of my heart to be a good writer however there are times where I wish I could be better. I would love to be able to post work on here and get great comments and fulfill my dreams. Please read my work and give me some feedback it would be most appreciated.

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    2 years agoReply
    Love this, please update. xx
    Thunder
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    His name was Jimmy and he was perfect. Pale blue eyes, long brown hair, and a face that looked as though it had been carved by angels. He was a rose at the top of the social ladder while I was a thorn...
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    4 years agoReply
    I chose this song too! :) But I love what you did with it :) Very focused on the title which I think is a good idea :)
    If you have a chance to read mine I would really appreciate it.
    Frozen in Time
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    When the city of Pompeii shook, it seemed as if the universe was collapsing; the blackness of space fell through Earth’s gates to crush the many breaths and to steal the many souls that lived so luxuriously...
    Olivia Cal
    4 years ago
    Thank you! :) And yeah of course I will, though I'll have to do it tomorrow since I cant keep my eyes open :P
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    4 years agoReply
    Hey, I am using Bastille for my inspired song also, but I love your idea for your story very imaginative and well, different!
    Can't wait to read yours when you continue it.
    Rubble And Sin
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    *Placed 2nd in the Inspired by A Song Competition! Based on Pompeii by Bastille* This is a little story narrated by Death's distant cousin, the Dream Taker. "At 8:15 that morning, 61,600 bodies walked...
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    4 years agoReply
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    Was disappointing by the fact you cannot choose your own songs from your own preference. Kinda defeats the point to me as everyone will have similar stuff surely????
    goodytwoshoes
    4 years ago
    Thisis your chance to become original. Twist a songs lyrics into your own. Then it won't be similar to someone else's.
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    mumbled "One direction, bugger off!"

    4 years agoReply
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    I honestly joined this to be able to read some interesting work and therefore be inspired to continue with my own writing but what the hell is all this one direction fan crap got to do with writing novels and stories? For one there is too many of them therefore there is no originality of it and two, its a band. That's it. They aren't even that good of a band, good bands are like Led Zepplin and ACDC, not 1D. Please can people be original and thought provoking with their stories and not write about a group of boys that think that they can sing, and didn't even win the contest of X-factor? Rant over.
    sakura❀
    4 years ago
    agreed.
    TheFuzz
    4 years ago
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    I WHOLEHEARTEDLY CONCUR.
    Today, somebody said that my sci-fi was 'amazayn' *facepalm*
    I died a little inside.
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