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There is a difference between everything and anything. - My name is Rebecca. I like the idea of some impossible things, but not others. I believe in love but I am not too sure what to make of the ideas of luck, fate, and destiny. I do like the idea of 'happily ever after' but I understand that it is not always that simple. I understand that life can be incredibly complicated and difficult but I still believe in optimism and hope in the face of pessimism and despair. - For more of my writing, find me on FictionPress as showmethestarlight, and on FanFiction as NeverBeLonely.

  • RebeccaHarrisWriting

    mumbled "An Update"

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    I have removed my Movellas 'Black Boots & Secret Missions' and 'The Girl in the Picture' because they both need a lot of editing. Hopefully they'll be on this site again at some point in the future and hopefully one day I'll actually finish writing 'Black Boots'! It may also have a new title next time you see it, there is going to be quite a lot of editing!
    Until next time,
    Rebecca
    Anna Gracelyn
    11 months ago
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    Aww, I hope you do finish Black Boots at some point as I liked that :)
  • RebeccaHarrisWriting
    I love your use of metaphors at the beginning and end of the chapter, and I like how this chapter is in Alfred's perspective instead of Euan.
    Azkaban
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    The sentence was eighteen months. I got a lifetime. (Originally posted elsewhere, but I thought it'd be fun to put it up here whilst I edit. Will be ten chapters in total when all uploaded!)
    Helen Hiorns
    1 years ago
    Thanks, Rebecca! i'm not usually madly keen on changing POV, but it was pretty fun to do for this story :) :)
  • RebeccaHarrisWriting
    Great chapter, I'm glad at the end of the chapter she realises what she's doing and stops! Also, since you said you were open to suggestions of songs, I thought I'd give you a few more:
    Are You Happy Now? by Megan and Liz
    Titanium by David Guetta ft. Sia
    Who Says by Selena Gomez & The Scene
    Skyscraper by Demi Lovato
    You’re a No One by Liddy Clarke
    Wings by Little Mix
    Lyrical Remedy
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    Hazel Belle has only one cure to her problems...her many many problems. Life is tough for her, everyone in her life only comes and goes. No one truly stays by her side, they all leave sooner or later....
    LalaTatum
    1 years ago
    thanks so much ill check them all out :)
  • RebeccaHarrisWriting
    Hey, really enjoying this story so far! I was thinking, I mean, you probably have the plot of the story and the lyrics you want to use planned out already, but I think the song Mean by Taylor Swift could probably fit with the bullying aspect of this story. It's just a suggestion and of course you don't have to use it if you don't want to. But anyway, great story!
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    Hazel Belle has only one cure to her problems...her many many problems. Life is tough for her, everyone in her life only comes and goes. No one truly stays by her side, they all leave sooner or later....
    LalaTatum
    1 years ago
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    thanks heaps ill listen to it now and if i use it ill dedicate the chapter to u :)
    RebeccaHarrisWriting
    That's great, I'm glad you found my suggestion useful. :)
  • RebeccaHarrisWriting
    Ooh, suspenseful! Nice cliffhanger at the at the end of Chapter 14. Just a small tip, when you use "let's just say" it sounds a little odd in narration, it'd probably sound better in a diary or letter or something, I don't know, it's just not something I've read before in the narrative part of a story, you could probably use it when Hayley is writing in her diary or something, though. I hope you don't mind me giving you a little advice! But yeah, it's a great story and I enjoyed reading this chapter!
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    Haley is your average 18 year old girl, her life seems perfectly normal until ,Matt, her former best friend returns for revenge. Charlie and Tiffany are her current best friends and go to school with her...
    LalaTatum
    1 years ago
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    oh okay thank you so much, your welcome to give me as much advice as possible i take it all into consideration :) thank you
    RebeccaHarrisWriting
    I'm so glad you found my advice useful! If I think of any other advice then I'll make sure to comment. :)
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