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  • Raven Girl

    mumbled "3333!"

    3 years agoReply
    I have broken the 3,333 word mark on the new draft of my sequel novel to Momentum. I have had writer's block for ages so I am going to celebrate even the small victories.
  • Raven Girl
    3 years agoReply
    I started out by posting this one on my Facebook page under the name Brenna Neser. Both places will get updated around the same time.
    Sunlight
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    Set in a post-apocalyptic world, this story follows Skye as she tries to figure out what happened while she was locked away in a secret laboratory in the middle of the desert.
  • Raven Girl
    3 years agoReply
    I liked this. I thought it was really good and with a small amount of polishing up could go from a good story to a great one. You were really able to capture some good emotions in the writing. I will keep an eye out for some more of your work in the future.
    Dark and Dawn
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    Isabel never seems to be in control of her own life. She has been promised to another man, but she is in love with a vampire. A creature of the night. Their love is dangerous, and it plunges her life into...
    C. Emilie
    3 years ago
    Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it. I agree it definitely needs some polishing - I am still not 100% happy with it because I feel it could be a lot better.
  • Raven Girl

    Please read my stuff?

    3 years agoReply
    I'm not used to asking people to read my work, but I would really like some feedback. Anything I have posted would be good to get some comments on. Please, be honest as well. I'm a big girl and I can take some criticism. Thank you in advance.
  • Raven Girl

    mumbled "Okay, Seriously? What is with the One Direction?"

    3 years agoReply
    I'm not trying to offend anyone, but I really need to know, what is with the 1D obsession? I can't turn around on this site without running into a group, a user name or a fanfiction about the band. I mean, sure their music is not bad and they've got a bit of a story, but does it really need this level of coverage? Again, I would never tell someone not to listen to a certain band or try to rain on someone's fangirl (or boy) parade, but even some of the fans would have to think it's getting a bit much, right?
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