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I'm a funky active person who has a black belt 2nd degree in tae kwon do and am on the Raiders team for my JROTC squad at my school. Yes I'm a girl.

  • Raider Freeson

    mumbled "What's Up?"

    Hey guys. Come check out my movella. It's just little over 13 chapters featuring teen drama and romance. I'm sure many will love it (hopefully) Let me know what you guys think in the comment section please! :D
  • Raider Freeson
    I would have prefered a more drawn out scene. Add to the drama. I read one of your others and it had such beautiful descriptions in it. I believe here you can use that and describe how she feels while she reads each line or describe where she goes next. you get the gist? Other than that, this was an okay start.
    Travelling with Danger
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    Cherry - young, bright, pretty - orphan. Following her late mothers footsteps was Cherry Flow, travelling and unravelling her mothers mysterious departure. But what she dosent know is that danger is around...
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    Nice descriptions. What's up with the short chapters? The're cool and all but don't u think you can use your prowess to write more lengthy chapters?
    True Beauty
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    You would think the perfect love story contains a beautiful girl and a handsom boy but what you don't know is that we are not all beautiful. Becca's story will tell you her POV
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    This is a short but creepy beinning to what could be a very good movella. Keep up the good work and i'll definately follow this one's progress :)
    Lurking
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    You would think the world was a safe place. I definately don't.
  • Raider Freeson
    this is really cool! :)
    New Kind
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    Dakota is the new Cullen family child. At 19 years old, no ones knows she is a Cullen/Black. She loves One direction.... a lot, but will 1D find what she is and fall for her or will the vultory find out...
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