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'Everyone is fighting their own battles, so don't be a c***'

I am far from a professional when it comes to writing, I sometimes misspell words and misuse punctuation but I still continue to tap that keyboard, simply because I love it. I enjoy nothing more than sinking into another life for a few hours and after spending so many hours engrossed in the imaginations of other authors I decided I would give it a go myself.

I welcome ALL criticism, all I ask is that it be constructive; 'Its rubbish' just isn't going to help me become a better writer.

In return I promise to be as honest and helpful with your work as I can.

  • R.Swain
    4 years agoReply
    I really like the first chapter, I like the simplicity, it gets right to the heart of the story so quickly however I think a bit more detail of the scene could really bring it alive - R.Swain (The catchers)
    Half a Story: What Never Was
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    Bad boy Mark, asks out goody-goody Ellie after months of working up the courage. She says no & he feels stupid. That's only half the story. Ellie makes the accidental mistake of saying no to Mark &...
    Louise McBear
    4 years ago
    Thanks. This is meant to sort of be part 2 of Half A Story, so you've had the real part of it, now you've got what the real Ellie thinks could of happened. (I have characters, similar to my friends, but they've got different names). The first chapter was meant to give the reader more questions, than answers, but I've tried t put more detail in the other chapters.
    Thanks for reading!!! :-)
  • R.Swain
    4 years agoReply
    Wow. Love this! such an original idea, such a brilliant idea! I'm really excited to finish reading this. :)
    Seventeen Seconds
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    Initial pain, hatred, sadness caused by another human being only lasts roughly seventeen seconds, after that all emotion felt is caused by our minds subconscious as a defence and survival mechanism, ourselves...
    D.B. Fairless
    4 years ago
    I'm really excited to finish writting it, is become quite special to me so I'm glad you like it
  • R.Swain
    4 years agoReply
    I haven't read any of the story yet but I just had to come and tell you how much I LOVE your cover! the contrast of the bright red against the rest of the traditional cover is just so pretty to look at. Also I really enjoyed reading your summary. It is so descriptive and really has me intrigued. I will come back to offer more feedback once I have actually read some. :)
    Midnight Masquerade
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    Vampires play their midnight masquerade each night. Pretending that they are still the proud lords and ladies many of them once were. Even these reanimated corpses love nothing more than their fun and...
  • R.Swain
    4 years agoReply
    So refreshing to read something so positive. so many people concentrate on the bad things in life and only seem to take inspiration from the horrible things that happen. I really enjoyed reading this and genuinely feel uplifted :)
    Passions & Dreams
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    Go confidently, in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined. Copyright (C)
    J.K. Panesar
    4 years ago
    thanks you and im glad it made u feel that way.
  • R.Swain
    4 years agoReply
    I LOVE your cover!! it's so simple but so beautiful! I haven't read any of the story - yet- but I did read your summary & I think it's okay, I think you should choose a word other than deep to describe Leon. I don't think its a good word to describe anyone its just so predictable and unimaginative.

    As soon as I've read some I'll give some more feedback :)
    Little Thorns
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    Even a big beautiful rose may still have a thorn in its side~ Alex and Alexis both beautiful simple girls and Leon a gorgeous deep guy what happens when their life's intertwine?
    Dayna
    4 years ago
    when i redid the description i didnt plan to finalize it yet i just kinda re did it for the new name
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