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In canada we like to walk out Polar Bears and dress them up in little costumes.
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  • QueenOfAwesome
    Honestly I love this, because it's important. Though some fan fictions from the 1D fandom are actually very good, I agree that there is a lot of cliche things that happen, and for the weirdest reason ever, the bad ones are the only ones that surface to the popular page. There needs to be a way to make sure the really good authors are noticed too.
    Rants of Movellas
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    My pen name is Movellas Reporter. I warn you before you read this... If you're a One Direction fan... you're gonna be offended. These are the rants I've posted on the forums. Or maybe some of the movellas...
  • QueenOfAwesome
    I'm Sorry, but I can't review your story unless you at least put it through a word processor, because there are too many mistakes for me to fix them all. thanks. :)
    Beauty IS the enemy!
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    In her family, beauty runs through 1 in 6 children during each generation. Consequently, it means the "lucky one" has a chance of having the power of adrenaline. The strongest drug and influence known...
  • QueenOfAwesome
    Okay, here's what I can find after literally just waking up and scanning a movella for any mistakes possible:
    You seem to like repeating words. Try and find some other words to describe 'zesty', 'minty' and you also said 'bloom' a couple times near to eachother.
    When you were talking about the bees, you accidentally said 'are' instead of 'were'
    You forgot 'with' when talking about the children racing to the school.
    You have quite a few run-on sentences as well.
    :-)
    Mwah!
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    This is just that small piece of writing I wanted some reviews to comment on and give criticism. It's not that long and if you aren't a reviewer feel free to read I'd like to know your opinion too. This...
  • QueenOfAwesome
    I really want to do this but first I'll need to remember how to write a short story
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    Hello! As part of my college's IB Programme, I am required to conduct a project. I have decided to host a writing competition. The winners of this competition will receive lots of free books and free...
  • QueenOfAwesome
    your poetry is amazing! but i must say when i read starcrap i giggled
    Typed Music
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    Poems. I suppose these are just little pieces of me, wrapped up in words. The forgotten melodies of my mind.
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    Thanks... to be honest star crap was a big joke of my science teacher's so I guess it's fine to laugh - it's more light hearted than some of the stuff I've written!
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