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I love to write, and I'm a grammar freak. I hope you like my work!

  • PurplePen

    mumbled "Hey There!"

    4 years agoReply
    Hey Peeps! I'm new here, and wanting to just talk to people. I love to write, and to read. So... yeah!

    (Also, pwease check these out. Pwetty pwease? With sugar ontop?
    The FallenPeople have been dropping dead. Stone cold. No one knows why, or how. They are dead. Gone. They have fallen.

    The Cottage in The WoodsThe story of a young boy who has been alone his whole life. He lives in a small cottage in the woods. One day, a local girl named Misty falls into his...

    Thanks Peeps!)

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    PurplePen
    4 years ago
    *Forth
    Just Fly
    4 years ago
    -.- I'm over that, but if you tell him, I swear I'll tell B.R that you think she's hot XD
    PurplePen
    4 years ago
    *Does little victory dance that I was correct, and then hides in a corner in response to your threat* Go on Skype.
  • PurplePen
    4 years agoReply
    This is great! I think you have really used the Olympic situation well! It has been presented well, and it rhymes perfectly.

    This is the best sporting based poem I have read for ages! Well done!

    Keep writing!
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    This is a relatively short poem about an Olympic athlete
    Robz99
    4 years ago
    Thanks! I entered this in my school writing competition back in October and I came second. The theme was "celebration" ;-)
    PurplePen
    4 years ago
    Oh cool! Well done!
    Robz99
    4 years ago
    Thanks :-)
  • PurplePen
    4 years agoReply
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    Wow, this is great! I love how it fits together perfectly, and rolls of the tongue when read aloud. Keep writing more! You have a real talent!
    Lethal Life Of Love
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    A book of poems made by none other than me (Lilmisswondererr) check them out out if you dare.
    SAISXO
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it:D
  • PurplePen
    4 years agoReply
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    The poems flows like the river it contains... It's really great! Only one point that I can give to help your writing: It looks more professional and more attractive to the reader if all the lines in a poem start with a capital letter.

    That, however, is just a matter of opinion. Write how you want! It's a poem, and they're not supposed to be grammar perfect, just filled with feeling!

    And your's simply bathes the reader in emotion. Keep writing!
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    Love,For ever
    Dinakar
    4 years ago
    Thanks PurplePen.Thanks for the suggestion.Most of the time I write sixline verse(Sestet).First ,third and fifth line start with capital letters as the two lines convey a particular sub theme with in the poem.I am very happy, you enjoy my poems.Once again thanks
  • PurplePen
    4 years agoReply
    Wow... This sounds really good so far... Looking forward to an update! It sounds so mysterious! Well done!
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    Moving to a new school, Alexis Scott doesn't know who to trust. Her parents thought she was insane, her best friend was all the way back home and she was stuck with no one but herself. Until she walked...
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    4 years ago
    Thanks so much, I'll update tonight :) xoxo
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