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I LOVE creative writing, escpecially writing really insidious, descriptive pieces, and writing things that shock or surprise people!

  • PregnantCatfish
    this is really good! my favourite bits: commanding a bully to piss himself before shooting him (awesome), and the commanding effect of the voice (I was a bit disappointed that some of the classmates escpaed though...!).
    I think Edward probably needed to have a worse time to become as insane and tormented as he did. I think accentuating the bullying, having worse and worse events building up to his breakdown would have had a more dramatic effect. Having said that, i did genuinely enjoy reading this and i think it'll be a very strong movella! liked and faved
    Duallity
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    What happens to a mind when tormented for long enough? Read to discover. (WARNING VERY STRONG CONTENT)
  • PregnantCatfish
    thanks a lot, i appreciate it. i think muse just make this 100% more awesome!
    Bullying Bieber
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    The situation: President Bieber has the USA enveloped and oppressed in a smooth, pre-pubescent iron fist. Only a small rebel army can take him down- but the leader has a mysterious past... NOTE: this...
    R K Guron
    5 years ago
    I was about to say you'd lost me with the plunger. Then I was about to ask what you meant. Then I realised that is something best kept between you and James :)
    PregnantCatfish
    5 years ago
    umm... yeah
    jamesdude24
    5 years ago
    Ahh, that fateful day. Some scars will never heal, I'm afraid :(
  • PregnantCatfish
    haha, thanks a lot. Thanks for the like as well!
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    The situation: President Bieber has the USA enveloped and oppressed in a smooth, pre-pubescent iron fist. Only a small rebel army can take him down- but the leader has a mysterious past... NOTE: this...
  • PregnantCatfish
    haha, thanks a lot guys. Athough if you actually read it i'm sure you'll like it! Adam, i read sex crime 2012- it's REALLY good!
    Bullying Bieber
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    The situation: President Bieber has the USA enveloped and oppressed in a smooth, pre-pubescent iron fist. Only a small rebel army can take him down- but the leader has a mysterious past... NOTE: this...
    PregnantCatfish
    5 years ago
    haha, probably too truthful for them... and not enough swearing, sex or violence
  • PregnantCatfish
    i thinks it's a good idea and your description of tyler, although brief, is good. I would have liked more description, as lia-loves-cookies said, but i think if you keep this style all the way through you could have a very good movella.
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    After moving around with her mother and father all over Ireland and the UK, they settle in a small town in England, but all Aisling has ever wanted is the be accepted and wanted. But when she meets Tyler...
    tresmellon
    5 years ago
    I'll be editing stuff later on so I'll work on the description.It's just a draft at the moment to see what people think of the plot:) Thank you:)
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