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  • Prashant
    6 years agoReply
    First verse took my heart away. Poem flows very well in and the concept of "rhyme" , you used here is really worth appreciating.

    At few places I felt rhyming was contrived, however, its a great write.

    Write on :)


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    aditiboo
    6 years ago
    thank you and i do appreciate the constructive criticism. :)
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