FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 4 Mar 13Age 19Last online 3 years ago

I'm Ella.
I write poetry and stories (of any genre, except from fan-fictions...)

I drink tea religiously, speak like the Queen and love punk music.
Oh yes, did I also mention that I'm British?

Check out my best friend Millie's account, she's a super awesome writer and an amazing person! @FrogsInTrees
P.S....she's a weirdo like me;D

  • pigeon
    4 years agoReply
    Great start! Be really careful with your tenses though- you slip from present to past tense a lot. Just go through it and read it out loud to see if it sounds right.
    Also, I would suggest to put in more detail and make the coffee that she shares with Harry longer because it's an important part of the story. How does she feel about it all?
    Really good though all in all, I like the strong narrative voice of your character.
    Please could you critique mine? I saw your post on the forum:) If you don't want to read the whole thing (as it is prettyyy long) then could you just check out my last chapter? Of course, I'd love it even more if you read even more but I don't mind if you don't want to.
    Thanks!
    HauntedPeople have called Imogen weird all of her life. They say that there's just something about that makes her like this- but what is it? When Imogen has...

    HauntedPeople have called Imogen weird all of her life. They say that there's just something about that makes her like this- but what is it? When Imogen has...
    All Good Things Must End
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    Natalie, a nineteen year old girl, meets pop-star, Harry Styles, after he spills her coffee on her. Love erupts and there is nothing stoping them.
    Dj_nialler69
    4 years ago
    Ok thank you so much I'll fix that and I'll read yours now thanks so much!
  • pigeon
    4 years agoReply
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    You're one of the best authors I've seen on here:) so glad I stumbled upon this story:) write more!!
    Ace of Blood
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    Alice has found a new kind of wonderland. Jamie Cunning is just an ordinary girl. Sort of. Bearing the scars of a thousand painful memories, old an new, she found a strange set of friends in the abandoned...
    Ariadne Wight
    4 years ago
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    Oh my gosh thank you so much! Honestly, I don't think many people read anything I write (haha) but that's ok with me, because that makes every one of my readers special!
    I'm glad you like it, and I'll totally try my hardest to actually stick to this story until the end (most of the time I get sidetracked and end up starting something new after a few weeks).
    pigeon
    4 years ago
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    I always feel like that too- it seems like people only read 1D fan fictions;/ You'll be able to do it if you put your mind to it; determination is what gets people far in life! Good luck x
    Ariadne Wight
    4 years ago
    Thanks!! I'll try to stay on top of this one this time!
  • pigeon
    4 years agoReply
    You're a really great writer! The way you write really brings the story alive:)
    Indivisible
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    This story chronicles Annie Cresta's time in the Hunger Games and her relationship with Finnick Odair WARNING: Contains mentions of swearing, drinking, violence and sexual assault.
    cosmicsweetheart
    3 years ago
    i only noticed this comment now but thank you so much :D
  • pigeon
    4 years agoReply
    Interesting that you used Tom Baker...a great choice in my opinion! Great story!
    Little Miss Riding Hood
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    A Fourth Doctor Who story: There's wolves abroad in Stockby. Can Sinead save the day or will she need help from Mr Smith and his journalist friend Sarah Jane ? .
  • pigeon
    4 years agoReply
    Wow:)! This is really great!
    Butterfly
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    Chrysanthemum George (otherwise known as Chrys) is drowning in a world of self-harm, suicide and dark thoughts. Recovery has never been her plan but when a new face arrives on the scene will Chrys have...
    Constafani
    4 years ago
    Thank you :)
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