FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 14 Jun 12Last online 2 months ago

I'm a British citizen who loves to read, write and watch movies. I hope you enjoy my Movellas and Happy Reading!

  • PenToPaper
    2 years agoReply
    This is pretty good so far and has potential :) However, I do want to point out that there are a few grammatical errors. If you're unsure, try copying the chapter into a Word document and it should highlight them for you :) Other than that, good start
    Taking Chances
    Taking Chances
    1
    344
    5
    Alaska Thomas is 16 years old, ever since she was a little girl she watched the Olympics with her dad every year. But her most favorite part was gymnastics, every day of her life is half reality with...
    Forevski
    2 years ago
    I also wanted to say there is another website for writing, like movellas but a little more serious. I'm thinking it wont be much of a problem for you! Maybe you should give it a try.
    PenToPaper
    2 years ago
    Okay, what is it called?
    Forevski
    2 years ago
    I will have to get back to you on that one, my cousin uses it, I'll have to ask her what it's called
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Update: "Suicide""

    2 years agoReply
    Oops, sorry, I updated this by writing a "short" story about how pressure can kill. However, it was a little longer than expected and it added 20 minutes to the reading time. Sorry :/ But I'm proud of this chapter :)
  • PenToPaper
    2 years agoReply
    This sounds like it could have good potential, the story line sounds great! But, there are a few SPAG (spelling, punctuation and grammar) errors, so I suggest a review? Good start though! :D
    why me
    why me
    3
    643
    11
    Clary has never been normal and when she moves to a town in Britain, she meets this guy and some friends are hiding something. She knows it but will they turn out to be like her?
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Comments and stuff..."

    2 years agoReply
    1 Like
    So, basically, I've found that when I write new stories, although I get views, I don't get much CC (or many comments for that matter!) and this really makes me wonder what the point is. My parents don't care about my writing, so I turn to people on here, but even tht doesn't happen :'( I promise that from now on, if you comment on my story, I will read one of yours and comment too. Comment for a comment exchange! :) please wonderful writers out there, this means a lot to me and I love writing so much! :) x
    Alex Alpha
    2 years ago
    I'am new here in this community and I think that your a better writer, so can you see one of my story ,but I haven't finish it yet so please wait for it :) (peace)
    PenToPaper
    2 years ago
    Hey! Welcome to Movellas! :) Aw thank you, of course, just let me know when you want me to take a look :)
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Lack of updating.... again!"

    3 years agoReply
    I want to say the deepest apologies to my lack of updating recently. I am going through year 13 (17-18) and I am super stressed at the moment, so I don't have much free time to update anything :( I will try at some point, possibly have to wait until after January mock exams though... Sorry :/
    PenToPaper
    3 years ago
    I do try to find motivation, but I procrastinate too much! :P No, it's not too bad, but I have to complete the first draft before the 18th January, which sounds ages away, but I also have mock revision to do at the same time! Just stressing me out at the moment!
    Midnight Rogue
    3 years ago
    Urgh, mocks... I never do well in mocks XD
    PenToPaper
    3 years ago
    I did alright last year, I just think I'm not going to do very well this time :/
Loading ...