FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 15 Oct 12Age 20Last online 5 years ago

Ive never really enjoyed reading, unfortunately i just cant find that passion...although ive always enjoyed writing XD though im not that good at it, maybe some constructive criticism will help :)

  • Paranoid.
    5 years agoReply
    Wait, is this really real? this is so sad :O good story overall, but seriously?
    Im to young for this
    Im to young for...
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    This is a diary a 15 year old girl writes when she finds out shes pregnant no one knows yet she doesn't know how to tell them or how they'll take it especially her boyfriend Dan.... as it isn't his baby.
  • Paranoid.
    5 years agoReply
    Ahh, interesting story, kind of worrying since this could be based on a true story XD but awesome use of language and good description! keep it up!x
    Abducted
    Abducted
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    This was originally my narrative for school but now im entering it in this competiton please help me win
    JacB410
    5 years ago
    Haha Thx :D don't worry it's not true
  • Paranoid.
    5 years agoReply
    It was just a short story that for some reason just sprung into my head. I decided to give it a try on here, this is my first time ive ever attempted anything like this, so please any sort of constructive criticism will be very helpful! and please feel free to tell me what you thought of it, good or bad :)
    Silent Tears.
    Silent Tears.
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    What would you do if you had so much self loathing building up inside of you? ashamed? hurt? destroyed?
  • Paranoid.

    mumbled "SO..."

    5 years agoReply
    Im in the middle of writing my first ever story/book thing!! aha so its gonna probably take me a while! and probably wont be described very good, or a good story line :L so yeah but because i have no! ill repeat, no! experience phaha, but there is a story on its way XD so yeah wish me luck!!
  • Paranoid.

    mumbled "High school never ends."

    5 years agoReply
    UGHH, i cant wait till i leave school, only this year left, and im off to college, made so many bad mistakes, and met so many cruel people, people you think are your best friends or whatever kinda crap that is, and they turn out to be back stabbing bitches! urgh, And people are just so horrible too!. Just you wait and see until i fulfill what i want to do with my life! all this pain, all this hurt will be worth it!
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