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  • p0pc0rnwriter
    2 months agoReply
    OMG I don't know what to say its AMAZING AND BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 well done is ther going to be more or like are you going to publish your story when it's finished?
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    *FEEDBACK ONLY* This is the first chapter of a longer work (that's complete) and I'm needing some feedback on it. It's about Toni Durand, a girl who wakes up in a lab, in a city filled with the dead....
    Acsaxe
    2 months ago
    THANK YOU. And, yes, it's technically done, though I won't be posting the rest on Movellas due to this being a series and sometimes I have to go back and change chunks of the book to fit with the rest of the books (that is still being written). But thank you for commenting!
    p0pc0rnwriter
    2 months ago
    will you publish it anywhere else i really want to read it lol and yes it's THAT good :)
    Acsaxe
    2 months ago
    Ha! No, it won't be published anywhere else, but I can make the rest a draft, I guess, and give you the early access code. Be warned, though, I'm only keeping it up for a short amount of time in the drafts because the story is not meant to be on any sites. Because you want to read it (and anyone else who asks), I'll give you the code. Just comment on this or write on my wall when you start reading and/or want the access code.
  • p0pc0rnwriter
    3 months agoReply
    wow really good i recommend it but can you like write more lol jk its just the tension 10/10 also just thought i'd let you know there is a spelling mistake on chapter 6 when it says "passed out, our dead"
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    TRIGGER WARNING! Hello, I am Cassidy White, this is my story.
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    lol thanks for pointing that out, tbh I don't usually check over the chapters before Publishing them
  • p0pc0rnwriter
    3 months agoReply
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    wow i think its even better except 100/10 amazing and maybe a week is a long time for when she hit her head unless you make the reader understand she was in bed all week or something and also for chapter 4 there is spelling mistake for "and watch dishes" lol sorry just thought that you would like to know
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    Piper just moved to her new school, and she is positive that there is something wrong with. The history of the school isn't the best, and the principal never comes out of his office. She is determined...
    PurplePerson
    3 months ago
    Hey, thanks. I am not the best proofreader of my own work...only others. You could ask anybody I have conversated with, and they will tell you that I have corrected them more than ten times. But never my own work. :) Ha ha. Well, I am glad that you are enjoying my story so far. Thanks!!!
  • p0pc0rnwriter
    3 months agoReply
    Was too long and boring i couldn't read anymore 4/10 for storyline and you don't really know if the mother is dead or ran away
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    Quin Davies is somebody who can see the souls of those around her. Quickly realising others don't see the world the same way as her, Quinn settles into a life spent trying to ignore swirling souls in...
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