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  • OurLovesLikeASong
    I think it's a good idea but it's a little bit confusing. I think you missed some words sometimes and I think if you wrote it in past-tense it would be better. Otherwise I really like it.
    Save Me
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    Chloe Shell hasn't had the best of life. Since, her mother dying in a car accident when she was younger, and then her fiancé running away on their wedding day. Chloe has just about given up on love. But,...
    Sabitha.K
    3 years ago
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    Thanks. I will try and make sure to proof read it and make sure it makes sense, and I will change it to past tense from the next chapter. Thanks for reading.
    OurLovesLikeASong
    You're welcome:) I'm glad you could use it
    Sabitha.K
    3 years ago
    Thanks for the feedback
  • OurLovesLikeASong
    Jeg elsker dem!
    Citater ♥
    Citater ♥
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    Dette er en samling citater, som jeg er rigtig glad for og som jeg nyder at læse igen og igen og igen :D I er velkomne til at bruge dem, hvis i føler for dem. Either way, enjoy :3
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