FemaleDenmarkMember since 6 Sep 12Age 20Last online 1 months ago
I live to write - it's my passion. I'm seventeen years old and I live in Denmark. I will rather speak and write in English than Danish, because I don't really like the Danish language.
This is a poem that I wrote (and had to perform) for an English assessment. I thought I'd share it all with you :)
It's a little different to the one I actually performed in class. This is the edited...
No problem, sweetheart, your work really are amazing <3 Keep doing what you're doing and you'll end up as one of the best! <3 The only thing you maybe have to look at, will be your gramma <3 Some of the words starts with a big letter, where it shouldn't, and stuff like that, but I'm sure you'll figure that out <3 I can't wait to see you on the toplist some day <3 :D
If you're talking about my grammar near the top of the poem with random capitalisation, it's meant to be like that ^-^ They're song titles, and so that's how I've written it :) And thank you so so much, this honestly means so much to me :) <3
GLÆDER MIG TIL AT LÆSE! Iiiiih! Elsker Dayn (Mit shipnavn til Zayn & Drew)❤️❤️❤️
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Tag med Zayn og Drew på magiske eventyr denne jul, når de sammen skaber minder for livet midt i...
I don't really know what to think. The concept of the story is very great, but your gramma fails, so I can't understand, what you're trying to tell. Ex. What does "e" mean? It just doesn't make any sense to me. And your slang - when you describe - is not a good idea. You're a good writer, but keep the slang out please? At least out of the descriptions in her/his head. Great job, I look forward to read more! :)
The Devil's Last...
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This shall be my last dance.
(Cover Artist: River Summers)
Thanks! This is all unedited because of NaNo, which is where all the typos come from. Can you point out where the slang is; I'm usually not very good at identifying things like that.
WOW! Den er virkelig god! Og du er virkelig god til at skrive! Dine formuleringer passer godt til historien. Din grammatik er som den skal være - lidt småfejl, men intet du skal bekymre dig særlig meget over. Jeg håber din klasse vinder den konkurrence, for det fortjener I virkelig! ❤️❤️
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Min klasse er tilmeldt en konkurrence omkring Kærestevold, og jeg tænkte jeg ville dele den med jer.
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