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  • oliwia
    5 years agoReply
    i think that the title is really good for this story <3
    Daddy Won't Know
    Daddy Won't Know
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    Krissy Evans is a good girl. She always has been. Until she is convinced to come to her first end of the year party. Her image soon changes when she is thrown together with Colton Flynn in 7 Minutes In...
  • oliwia
    5 years agoReply
    i really love this story. when i read it, i just can't stop it.i just want more and more. this is so emotional <3
    i actually nearly cried, because of colton gets hurt. i think that you should continue this story. if you arleady did please send me a link to it or summat.
    i love the way you call krissy a "baby girl" this is so cute :-*
    the one thing you could make better is that you could add some more details about a feelings of being in touch of them couple. ( when they touch each other, what they feel, taste and everything) <3
    i know that you did write about the taste of colton's lips and everything. but i still want some more please
    and the last thing, please don't make them older. seventeen is the best age <3

    i love this so, so much. it's just amazing and awesome <3<3<3
    Oliwia :-D
    Daddy Won't Know
    Daddy Won't Know
    1489
    74.7k
    871
    Krissy Evans is a good girl. She always has been. Until she is convinced to come to her first end of the year party. Her image soon changes when she is thrown together with Colton Flynn in 7 Minutes In...
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