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I like to write stories.

  • Okay,Okay
    4 years agoReply
    Does the story you enter have to be written specifically for this competition? Because when I tried to enter, my only option was to create a new movella because I don't have any published after the starting date of this competition
    Okay,Okay
    4 years ago
    Ahh okay, thank you for letting me know! I don't think I'll bother then :)
  • Okay,Okay
    4 years agoReply
    Hey :) So I think the idea of this story is good and you can really go far with it. One of the main points though is you should maybe use speech marks around the speech to make it more clear when a character is talking, and to split up the paragraphs. So each time there is new speech do it on a new line so that your story can be read more easily! :)
    Just Another Ordinary Girl
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    Vanessa had never loved she had never been loved. She's moved from place to place toon to town all her life. All she has ever known was rejection, from here mother from her father from boys, girls even...
    zayn'sgurl
    4 years ago
    Ok thanks for the advice i hope this does go far we shall see i guess (fingers crossed) thanks again it means a lot
  • Okay,Okay
    4 years agoReply
    Aw Draco :) And since when did Seamus and Harry like her?haha
    Pure-Blood Gryffindor
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    Jamie-Leigh, or Jamie to her friends, has got a new letter. She usually only gets letters from her dad. She's classes herself as smart and she studies for tests that shes not even sure will happen soon....
    ~TheWolfBornPrincess~
    No idea i put it in because of the potions class when Harry ignored her but she never found out why and because of when she got in the Quiditch team they got closer. I added Seamus because i think his accent is way too cute :) xx
  • Okay,Okay
    4 years agoReply
    I think I want Draco and Jamie together.. I'm not sure haha x
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    Jamie-Leigh, or Jamie to her friends, has got a new letter. She usually only gets letters from her dad. She's classes herself as smart and she studies for tests that shes not even sure will happen soon....
    ~TheWolfBornPrincess~
    I don't know!!! They'd suit but i really don't want to let George down! :(
  • Okay,Okay
    4 years agoReply
    A good bit of drama in this chapter! I liked how you ended it on a cliff-hanger :)
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    Jamie-Leigh, or Jamie to her friends, has got a new letter. She usually only gets letters from her dad. She's classes herself as smart and she studies for tests that shes not even sure will happen soon....
    Okay,Okay
    4 years ago
    Yeah you did haha :) It was good!
    ~TheWolfBornPrincess~
    Thanks Rosh :D xx
    ~TheWolfBornPrincess~
    Welcome im adding you in the next one as well me and Rosh came up with a twister :) x
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