FemaleCanadaMember since 21 Sep 12Age 5Last online 5 years ago

Hiya, I'm Saphira.

I stole one of my BFF's profile pics! ;)

Novalee Zaiden is actually an alias Aimee (WenWenNeo) uses, but she said I could use it ask long as I credited her.

So here Amelia, consider yourself credited!

Weird name, huh? No, I am NOT named after the dragon from the Christopher Pallioni books!

I am WenWenNeo's best friend, but I don't go to her school. She made me get this account, I'll get you Amelia! And I'm like her publicist!

I'm not a story write, like my dear, dear, friend Amelia. Mock sarcasm on the dear, if you didn't notice.

So I am probably going to go talk to some ppl now, buh bye!

SA

  • Novalee Zaiden
    I like your points. I don't really like YOLO and Canadians rule! Also, another thing is 'Carpe Diem,' you can check out that saying too, if you don't know it.

    I like how you added points about things that happened in the past, just because it makes us connect way more and it just gts us to remember.

    If you aren’t busy and you wouldn’t mind helping my friend out, she’s entering the contest too. I think she’d appreciate all the help she can get because the topic is something very near and dear to her heart. This is the link, and we’re very grateful for all the criticism we get...
    The Road to Perfection (#KeepingItRe...Self esteem is something that's really hard to achieve, but pays off in the end. If you've ever felt ugly, fat, mental, weird or just isloated, you're...


    #KeepingItReal - Passions and Dreams
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    This is a competition entry for the #KeepingItReal contest. Out of the four categories, I chose to write about Passions and Dreams. Feedback is really appreciated and every like or favourite counts,...
    Martha
    5 years ago
    Carpe Diem, I've heard that before. Doesn't it mean 'Seize the day'?
    Thank you, I thought I was weird for putting that in! Haha. Thanks for the review darling!
    And I've read that one! It's one of my very favourites in the competition, actually. It's really amazing that she's put some very personal stories in there; I for one wouldn't be brave enough. You should be very proud of your friend. <3
  • Novalee Zaiden
    I find that you're kind of moving a bit too fast for me. Also, you said 'Women had to...'. I think that should be changed. Maybe change it to something a bit more flattering to the people who actually don't think like that. Your perspective on the way women act is only 3/4 true. I don't act like that, and my school doesn't really act like that either. You also have a few mistakes in spelling wise, but toher than that, it's great!!

    If you aren’t busy and you wouldn’t mind helping my friend out, she’s entering the contest too. I think she’d appreciate all the help she can get because the topic is something very near and dear to her heart. This is the link, and we’re very grateful for all the criticism we get...
    The Road to Perfection (#KeepingItRe...Self esteem is something that's really hard to achieve, but pays off in the end. If you've ever felt ugly, fat, mental, weird or just isloated, you're...


    The true reflection of us
    The true reflectio...
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    This is my entry for the keeping it real competition to show why us girls are truly beautiful inside out and we shouldn't let anyone tell us differently. My entry addresses beauty,vanity,bullying and...
    LoveOn
    5 years ago
    Thank you for your comment.There was and will be spelling mistakes in the future you see I'm only learning
    I'm not perfect nor am I trying to be.The reason for it is I grew up in Finland. I came here as a refugee and sure
    not everyone is alike that's the point in my article also I didn't mention schools nor did I imply that all schools are alike.
    Again thank you all feedback is important it will help develop my skills.
  • Novalee Zaiden
    Wow, this is amazing!

    THe only thing I can suggest is that you fix your spelling and there shouldn't be a space in between punctuation. I actually love the originality and power behind your words. You're so amazing and this, like so many other entries, is so inspiritng!

    If you aren’t busy and you wouldn’t mind helping my friend out, she’s entering the contest too. I think she’d appreciate all the help she can get because the topic is something very near and dear to her heart. This is the link, and we’re very grateful for all the criticism we get...
    The Road to Perfection (#KeepingItRe...Self esteem is something that's really hard to achieve, but pays off in the end. If you've ever felt ugly, fat, mental, weird or just isloated, you're...


    Standing up.
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    no more bullying. No more. PLEASE BRING BULLING TO A STOP THIS YEAR. PLEASE READ THIS POEM AND EVEN IF YOU DON'T PLEASE TELL AN ADULT IF YOU KNOW OR IF YOU YOURSELF ARE GETTING BULLIED BY SOMEONE. LETS...
  • Novalee Zaiden
    Um, why is this listed for the #KeepingItReal contest?? I don't think it should be entered for that.
    Vampirettes
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    One day one girl/vampire was dug out from her coffin after three hundred years. She searched for clues about her past because she had completely forgotten what had happened from 6 years old to now.
    simpsonsfan2
    5 years ago
    I dont know Iwill get it off
  • Novalee Zaiden
    I think it needs some refinement, kind of spelling wise and capital wise. Also, I feel like you're yelling at me. the way you phrase the words. It seems like a rant and there is a difference between inspiring people and just scaring them. I'm not tryin g to be mean, but I feel a little uncomfortable.

    If you aren’t busy and you wouldn’t mind helping my friend out, she’s entering the contest too. I think she’d appreciate all the help she can get because the topic is something very near and dear to her heart. This is the link, and we’re very grateful for all the criticism we get...
    The Road to Perfection (#KeepingItRe...Self esteem is something that's really hard to achieve, but pays off in the end. If you've ever felt ugly, fat, mental, weird or just isloated, you're...
    me and myself
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    me, my self and...errm.me myself and...see that's used to be the trouble.the me part.M.E.i couldn't do that, i couldn't wear the clothes that i wore,or talk how i talk. why cause im ME and me got bullied...
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