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  • NoeAyoade
    4 years agoReply
    hi, I really like your story; but I not like your writting is full of errors and the format is terrible. If you clean it and make the dialoges in differents parragraphs it will make your story even better
    drugs and one direction
    drugs and one dire...
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    a girl named Samatha Tomlison is an orphan, she got sepreated by her brothers after her parents died. So she started taking drugs and became an addict. She was an addict to everything now. She discovered...
    NoeAyoade
    4 years ago
    I'm sorry too, I didn't want to make you sad; I am kinda grammar nazi haha =). Well, you see the only thing that really annoyed me was the dialogues; just try and make each characters dialogue in a different paragraph and it will look cleaner.
    NoeAyoade
    4 years ago
    But like I said, I love your story and where it is going =D
    QueenV
    4 years ago
    thank you! I love you:*
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