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Hi :) I have a really bad habit of adding a smiley face at the end of all my sentences *inserts smiley just to prove point* :) And I'm also really critical; I've probably deleted more movellas than I've got published. So if you can't find a movella that I've written, sorry about that.
I've started writing pretty much since I first learned how to do it. Even before then, I loved coming up with crazy imaginary games, and awesome fantasy lands (including a candy world, ruled by evil chocolate bars which later became my first ever story). But now that I'm older, I prefer writing more realistic stories. ...Anyway, if you need any help or want me to read a movella just ask! :)
Awards: Gold in the Different Sides of a Dispute competition and the Who Framed Klaris Cliff competition, and voted second best Critique Giver - Paper Awards 2014


Out of my movellas I recommend reading:
-->Chameleon
-->The Swinging Lullaby

Twitter: @Ninaaknowles
Wattpad: Nina1277


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  • Nina :)

    mumbled "Why I haven't been very active"

    8 months agoReply
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    Hey guys, I hope you all haven't forgotten about me!

    Those of you who remember me would know how much more of an active member I was on here and I used to post a lot more often. But unfortunately I'm not too sure how I can fit everything in anymore as I feel so bogged down with school work.

    I never realised that A levels would be so difficult until I got my AS results which weren't as great as I planned. The fact that I have to resit some of my AS modules, keep on top of my current work, as well as have the thought of UCAS and my future constantly at the back of my mind... it's quite overwhelming. As well as this I have voluntary work, piano, driving lessons, and a job. Plus I need to sleep, have a social life and find time to see my boyfriend who gets upset when I don't see him enough D:
    On top of this I'm currently 3/4 of the way through my first proper novel (well the first one that I might actually complete!) but I've only published the first few chapters because I feel as if once it's done I will have to do massive amounts of editing before I want anyone to read it. xD

    I don't know why I'm even on here right now as I'm supposed to be doing my maths homework... but I thought I'd at least tell you guys what's been going on. I hope I'll manage to find more time in the future to be more active, but at the moment it's not looking too promising.

    In all honesty I don't know how I'm going to manage with all of this for much longer as it's stressing the hell out of me.

    Are any of you experiencing something similar? How are you coping with it?
    Alice♫
    7 months ago
    @Nina oh okay haha, yeah I don't think I'll be changing my mind; I've had my sights set on this for a long time :) though I'm keeping my options open anyway, always helps. what made you change your mind?
    Nina :)
    7 months ago
    Aww okay :) I really enjoy maths and physics, especially mechanics, and I thought I would benefit more from doing an engineering degree. It's not going to stop me from wanting to become a writer though so I'm still going to write whenever I have the urge :)
    Alice♫
    7 months ago
    Fair enough, at least that way you can do both :)
  • Nina :)
    11 months agoReply
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    An interesting start! I like how you write as if you're talking to the reader, and I like the cliff hanger at the end. Keep up the good work :)
    London Bridge is Falling Down
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    A story about the shocking discovery by a world-renowned prodigy surrounding the
    Random13
    11 months ago
    Thanks Nina. I need someone to honestly compare this story to the story Prisoner because I'm a bit rusty and I want to make sure I'm not moving backwards. I've added another chapter to this story but could you maybe compare them and tell me what you think please? Thanks again
  • Nina :)
    11 months agoReply
    I've read up to chapter three so far.
    I really loved the way you described Destane in this chapter - it makes him seem like a really interesting character. xD I also like how you build up a sense of mystery here (...can I just say that your description is amazing? XD )
    Sorry I'm taking so long to read this! I'll let you know you know what I think of the other chapters once I finish reading them :)
    A Tale of Two Sorcerors: The Coup D'état
    A Tale of Two Sorc...
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    Forty years before the events of "Aladdin", a major coup d'état took place. Jabril Halabi, husband of Pareesa and father of the sultan from the film, claimed the throne of Agrabah. Among those assisting...
    Nina :)
    10 months ago
    No problem :) I'm up to chapter 7 now (I really like all the artwork by the way xD)
  • Nina :)
    11 months agoReply
    This is really good! I like the sense of mystery that you create, particularly in the preface and your use of description. I also like how you express the character's emotions in a unique way - it's very intriguing.
    Occasionally some of your writing is a little choppy so make sure you don't use too many short sentences next to each other. Otherwise this is very good, well done :)
    Touch the Stars *Competition Version*
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    The stars are a wonder, as they say I am too. They say that as if I was angel, living amongst humanity. But I am no angel. Nothing is special, or different about me. Only that I have to live an eternal...
    ayezah
    11 months ago
    Thank you so much! I will make sure to fix those short sentences after the results are announced :)
    Nina :)
    11 months ago
    Okay haha :) Good luck!
    ayezah
    11 months ago
    Thanks!
  • Nina :)

    mumbled "Does anybody else do this?"

    11 months agoReply
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    I find that I often write a movella, decide I don't like it and delete it. Then read it again, decide I like it and add it again! (Then I delete and add it again xD ) Does anybody else do this?
    Nina :)
    11 months ago
    It's so annoying haha xD
    ColoradoKid420
    11 months ago
    Hahahaha. I get ya. It really is!!! :) There are some poems and stories that I've written about my parents or family that I always take down and put back up. I dunno, for some reason I always find myself second guessing about the super personal stuff. :D
    Nina :)
    11 months ago
    I can never make up my mind either haha��
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