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Hi :) I have a really bad habit of adding a smiley face at the end of all my sentences *inserts smiley just to prove point* :) And I'm also really critical; I've probably deleted more movellas than I've got published. So if you can't find a movella that I've written, sorry about that.
I've started writing pretty much since I first learned how to do it. Even before then, I loved coming up with crazy imaginary games, and awesome fantasy lands (including a candy world, ruled by evil chocolate bars which later became my first ever story). But now that I'm older, I prefer writing more realistic stories. ...Anyway, if you need any help or want me to read a movella just ask! :)
Awards: Gold in the Different Sides of a Dispute competition and the Who Framed Klaris Cliff competition, and voted second best Critique Giver - Paper Awards 2014


Out of my movellas I recommend reading:
-->Chameleon
-->The Swinging Lullaby

Twitter: @Ninaaknowles
Wattpad: Nina1277


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  • Nina :)
    1 weeks agoReply
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    An interesting start! I like how you write as if you're talking to the reader, and I like the cliff hanger at the end. Keep up the good work :)
    London Bridge is Falling Down
    London Bridge is...
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    A story about the shocking discovery by a world-renowned prodigy surrounding the
    Random13
    1 weeks ago
    Thanks Nina. I need someone to honestly compare this story to the story Prisoner because I'm a bit rusty and I want to make sure I'm not moving backwards. I've added another chapter to this story but could you maybe compare them and tell me what you think please? Thanks again
  • Nina :)
    2 weeks agoReply
    I've read up to chapter three so far.
    I really loved the way you described Destane in this chapter - it makes him seem like a really interesting character. xD I also like how you build up a sense of mystery here (...can I just say that your description is amazing? XD )
    Sorry I'm taking so long to read this! I'll let you know you know what I think of the other chapters once I finish reading them :)
    A Tale of Two Sorcerors: The Coup D'état
    A Tale of Two Sorc...
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    40 years before a streetrat married a princess, Mozenrath's ghostly city in the Land of the Black Sand was called Ahsa Asmara, and owned by Agrabah. Meanwhile, a young Agrabahn sorceror named Destane plots...
    Sinister Cutlass
    1 weeks ago
    Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on further chapters :)
    Nina :)
    5 days ago
    No problem :) I'm up to chapter 7 now (I really like all the artwork by the way xD)
    Sinister Cutlass
    Great! Well, most of the artwork is either screencaps or concept art from "Aladdin" itself, or simply other images I found on the web.
  • Nina :)
    2 weeks agoReply
    This is really good! I like the sense of mystery that you create, particularly in the preface and your use of description. I also like how you express the character's emotions in a unique way - it's very intriguing.
    Occasionally some of your writing is a little choppy so make sure you don't use too many short sentences next to each other. Otherwise this is very good, well done :)
    Touch the Stars
    Touch the Stars
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    The stars are a wonder, as they say I am too. They say that as if I was angel, living amongst humanity. But I am no angel. Nothing is special, or different about me. Only that I have to live an eternal...
    Queen of Madness
    2 weeks ago
    Thank you so much! I will make sure to fix those short sentences after the results are announced :)
    Nina :)
    2 weeks ago
    Okay haha :) Good luck!
    Queen of Madness
    2 weeks ago
    Thanks!
  • Nina :)

    mumbled "Does anybody else do this?"

    1 months agoReply
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    I find that I often write a movella, decide I don't like it and delete it. Then read it again, decide I like it and add it again! (Then I delete and add it again xD ) Does anybody else do this?
    Nina :)
    3 weeks ago
    It's so annoying haha xD
    Rosebud420
    3 weeks ago
    Hahahaha. I get ya. It really is!!! :) There are some poems and stories that I've written about my parents or family that I always take down and put back up. I dunno, for some reason I always find myself second guessing about the super personal stuff. :D
    Nina :)
    3 weeks ago
    I can never make up my mind either haha��
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