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Hi :) I have a really bad habit of adding a smiley face at the end of all my sentences *inserts smiley just to prove point* :) And I'm also really critical; I've probably deleted more movellas than I've got published. So if you can't find a movella that I've written, sorry about that.
I've started writing pretty much since I first learned how to do it. Even before then, I loved coming up with crazy imaginary games, and awesome fantasy lands (including a candy world, ruled by evil chocolate bars which later became my first ever story). But now that I'm older, I prefer writing more realistic stories. ...Anyway, if you need any help or want me to read a movella just ask! :)
Awards: Gold in the Different Sides of a Dispute competition and the Who Framed Klaris Cliff competition, and voted second best Critique Giver - Paper Awards 2014


Out of my movellas I recommend reading:
-->Chameleon
-->The Swinging Lullaby

Twitter: @Ninaaknowles
Wattpad: Nina1277


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  • Nina :)
    1 months agoReply
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    An interesting start! I like how you write as if you're talking to the reader, and I like the cliff hanger at the end. Keep up the good work :)
    London Bridge is Falling Down
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    A story about the shocking discovery by a world-renowned prodigy surrounding the
    Random13
    1 months ago
    Thanks Nina. I need someone to honestly compare this story to the story Prisoner because I'm a bit rusty and I want to make sure I'm not moving backwards. I've added another chapter to this story but could you maybe compare them and tell me what you think please? Thanks again
  • Nina :)
    1 months agoReply
    I've read up to chapter three so far.
    I really loved the way you described Destane in this chapter - it makes him seem like a really interesting character. xD I also like how you build up a sense of mystery here (...can I just say that your description is amazing? XD )
    Sorry I'm taking so long to read this! I'll let you know you know what I think of the other chapters once I finish reading them :)
    A Tale of Two Sorcerors: The Coup D'état
    A Tale of Two Sorc...
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    Forty years before the events of "Aladdin", a major coup d'état took place. Jabril Halabi, husband of Pareesa and father of the sultan from the film, claimed the throne of Agrabah. Among those assisting...
    Sinister Cutlass
    1 months ago
    Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on further chapters :)
    Nina :)
    1 months ago
    No problem :) I'm up to chapter 7 now (I really like all the artwork by the way xD)
    Sinister Cutlass
    1 months ago
    Great! Well, most of the artwork is either screencaps or concept art from "Aladdin" itself, or simply other images I found on the web.
  • Nina :)
    1 months agoReply
    This is really good! I like the sense of mystery that you create, particularly in the preface and your use of description. I also like how you express the character's emotions in a unique way - it's very intriguing.
    Occasionally some of your writing is a little choppy so make sure you don't use too many short sentences next to each other. Otherwise this is very good, well done :)
    Touch the Stars
    Touch the Stars
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    The stars are a wonder, as they say I am too. They say that as if I was angel, living amongst humanity. But I am no angel. Nothing is special, or different about me. Only that I have to live an eternal...
    Reine De La Folie
    1 months ago
    Thank you so much! I will make sure to fix those short sentences after the results are announced :)
    Nina :)
    1 months ago
    Okay haha :) Good luck!
    Reine De La Folie
    1 months ago
    Thanks!
  • Nina :)

    mumbled "Does anybody else do this?"

    2 months agoReply
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    I find that I often write a movella, decide I don't like it and delete it. Then read it again, decide I like it and add it again! (Then I delete and add it again xD ) Does anybody else do this?
    Nina :)
    2 months ago
    It's so annoying haha xD
    ColoradoKid420
    2 months ago
    Hahahaha. I get ya. It really is!!! :) There are some poems and stories that I've written about my parents or family that I always take down and put back up. I dunno, for some reason I always find myself second guessing about the super personal stuff. :D
    Nina :)
    2 months ago
    I can never make up my mind either haha��
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