FemaleMember since 16 Jun 12Age 19Last online 6 years ago

writing makes me feel older than i really am (13) but i feel as though my stories arent very good. i only signed up to movella to see if other people thought my stories were good or not so please feel free to give constructive critisism :)

  • Nikki XD
    6 years agoReply
    wow! your writing is reallyyy good, i wish i could write like that. iv only written one chapter of a book and to be honest i think its rubbish would you mind reading it and telling me what you think?
    A brief insight into the mind of a maniac
    A brief insight...
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    As my entry to the diary competition I thought I'd let everyone see what goes on inside my head. Sounds relatively boring correct? Well I doubt any of you have started a thought on chocolate and ended...
    Nikki XD
    6 years ago
    thanks so much and, how do i do that im new to this
    Nikki XD
    6 years ago
    if it helps its called " the house"
  • Nikki XD
    6 years agoReply
    sounds good so far :)
    Daddy Don't Go!
    Daddy Don't Go!
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    August, 1942. Just another normal day for the Thompsons, until a couple of soldiers turn their life upside down. When their father disappears into the fatal life of war, how will they survive? How will...
    _emilydfghj_
    6 years ago
    thank you:) it's a very short story. I've completed the rest of the chapters if you want to carry on reading:)?
  • Nikki XD
    6 years agoReply
    thats quite a good story, the only thing i would say as constructive critisism is: Your beginning is a little too unrealated to the main story but otherwise, its really good :)
    Indestructible
    Indestructible
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    Things get difficult for Taylor Janssen when her home is bombed by those who control it. She is forced to become a strange mix of superhero and assassin. Her best friend is Alex, but she makes friends...
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