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  • Nighthowler
    4 years agoReply
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    This is a very good story! I like the way it seems confusing at first, but then it suddenly all becomes clear at the end. It makes you feel really sorry for Ron, and a good story always makes you feel something for the characters. ^^
    A Day In The Life Of Robot Ronnie
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    Winner of the InkHead short story prize! With a 1000 word limit, I decided to try a different take :) This is a single diary entry describing a day in the life of Autistic Ron, i hope you enjoy.
    Nighthowler
    4 years ago
    I'm not sure- I can't really think of anything. Perhaps you could give a bit of a better idea on the setting or the age of the characters? Although I think it's a very good story, either way. ^^
    TheFuzz
    4 years ago
    Ah yess, age especially, thanks :D
    Nighthowler
    4 years ago
    No worries! ^^
  • Nighthowler
    4 years agoReply
    Just entered my first three chapters... Gonna enter the full story once it's done being proofread.
    Nighthowler
    4 years ago
    Ah... That's a bit of a jerkish move, isn't it? It is a shame... Awww... But anyway. I guess I'll just have to send it to a publisher the usual way, see what they think of it.
    Thank you very much! At least I've entered the first three chapters. That's a god thing, at least.
    TheFuzz
    4 years ago
    Agreed :/
    Good luck, i hope to see it in print one day!
    Nighthowler
    4 years ago
    Yeah...
    Thank you! You too!
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