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  • NerdyGirl!

    mumbled "Sorry Guys..."

    4 years agoReply
    Hey Guys sorry I haven't been uploading I have been sick. I have written the next Chapter of Double Life and Lightning in my note books should have a chance to type it up today or tomorrow.
  • NerdyGirl!
    4 years agoReply
    Can you read my one Double Life it is not to do with one direction and although it is a romance it is more to do with Homophobic views in todays society
    Shadow's Reviews
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    Decided to try my own. Idea stolen from Abba13 >:3
  • NerdyGirl!
    4 years agoReply
    Amazing. Really well written. I think the main criticism i have with it is the lack of discourse markers i.e. putting 3 asterix when there is a time jump would make the story a lot clearer

    Double LifeDarren is the most popular guy in school captain of the Basketball team dating the hottest girl in school. But is he keeping a secret that he can't admit...

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    A semi-fantasy world where vampires, werewolves and the supernatural are commonplace. A series of events unfold in the city of "Sanguine Town", that intertwine the fates of five men who are at most acquaintances...
    Kyle J Durrant
    4 years ago
    Okay. I'll go through and do that at some point soon(-ish). Thanks for the advice, and thanks for reading
    Kyle J Durrant
    4 years ago
    Think I've fixed it. Please tell me if I've missed any bits :)
  • NerdyGirl!

    mumbled "Feedback Please!!!"

    4 years agoReply
    Hey can you guys please checkout my Movella Double Life and give me some feedback I will in return give you some feedback and always be eternally grateful to you Thanks xx
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