FemaleUnited StatesMember since 15 Sep 13Age 23Last online 4 years ago

well i love one direction im talkative hyper but lazy and I love animals I have black hair green eyes Im 5'5 ummm I have some freckles and I wear sweats or skinny jeans and band T's

  • *nataly*
    4 years agoReply
    update please
    Diana
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    He could have killed me. Then and there. But instead he simply told me to "run." Now, I have fallen madly in love with this boy.....
  • *nataly*

    mumbled "Nialls girl"

    4 years agoReply
    "What" "Nothing jeez mind your own business, I don't want your help". I'm so tired of jack he can't shutup
    and he's a jerk I swear I'm done. " hey if you hate me so much why are we together?" "Good question, now were done, happy" "yes,nnerver been more happy." Natalia's P.O.V. I slammed the door and ran .I have always hated him I was only with him for a friend ,she loved him ( I don't know why!) I ran far it felt like hours had passed but I knew it had only been minutes. Nialls P.O.V I was walking out the front when I saw her she was beautiful she had black hair and green eyes she looked amazing. She also looked tired and sad I went up to her and introduced myself. " Hi, I'm niall." She looked startled I chuckled." Hi i-I'm Natalia." "You are very pretty." She blushed and tryed to hide it. I asked her if she needed a place to stay she smiled. " That would be nice." I smiled and welcomed her in. Natalias P.O.V. He was cute blue eyes dirty blond hair and perfect teeth he startled me when he walk up I had be alone for some time now so that would be nice. When I walked in it was so neat "wow" is all I could say he chuckled
    *nataly*
    4 years ago
    if anyone reads this I'm not done oh and advise would help a lot cause I'm new to this
    Eve Smallman
    4 years ago
    So you'd like advice? Right, so you've got a good basic structure, but you need to fix up punctuation and spelling mistakes (put it though something like Microsoft Word before pasting into Movellas) and tone down the POVs. It would be great if you didn't use them at all really, as it just gives the mystery away. But yeah, good job :).
    *nataly*
    4 years ago
    thanks for the advise and ya I saw mistake that I didn't mean to put and that was probably because im not using my laptop and thanks again oh and I'm not done
  • *nataly*
    4 years agoReply
    loved it!
    Stole My Heart
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    All the boys from One Direction are taking a couple months off to spend time with their family. Harry is excited to spend a lot of time with his mum. But he never thought he would find a girl on break...
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