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  • muppet
    5 years agoReply
    This is amazing!!! Really gripping- please keep on writing!!!! really enjoying reading this. absolutely outstanding.
    Missing Golden
    Missing Golden
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    Shauna is a Golden. A tiger princess decended from a long line of shifter royalty. Each Queen can only have a single child with her one destined mate so when the Queen commits suicide and Shauna runs away...
  • muppet
    5 years agoReply
    i love the storyline, and it makes me really want to read on. If you used a wider range of vocabulary i think it would improve your writing, and i think you can expand on the description of the scary girl, which will make the reader feel like they are in the book with the characters. Brilliant story. Enjoyed reading ot.
    The girl who stalked the corridors
    The girl who stalk...
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    All Alice wanted to do was work as a psychiatrist in a mental hospital, not end up in one as a patient. But as she gets more familiar with the daily routine she comes across the girl in the corridor and...
    olympiuslu
    5 years ago
    Thank you im glad you enjoy reading it! Thank you for your advice, I will use it throughout my story.
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