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  • mr.wolfie
    6 years agoReply
    I liked tje I dea of it but I feel it wasnt drawn out enough, everything happened so fast but well detailed. Keep writing, i'd like to see more
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    Christopher Clarence. There's something really strange about that boy. He's wide eyed and pale faced. Every time he grins, death strikes again. Surely a small boy cannot commit such a crime? But who's...
    J.K. Panesar
    6 years ago
    Thanks, I'll take your advice on board. I'll edit it so it gets better. I'm glad you liked it.
  • mr.wolfie
    6 years agoReply
    I like the story, its really good, but it could use alittle revision and editing. Its good though, keep writing, cant wait for more :)
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    Rose and Liam don't get on with each other. Some may even call it hate. But is it love? After all, there's a thin line between the two. Frenemies. But will a series of events cause them to become more...
  • mr.wolfie
    6 years agoReply
    Great work, I really liked it. Keep writing, can't wait to read more
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    Rose and Liam don't get on with each other. Some may even call it hate. But is it love? After all, there's a thin line between the two. Frenemies. But will a series of events cause them to become more...
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