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  • Mr. Enort
    4 years agoReply
    And you deserved a good night's sleep! Great story and I smell a sequel---Poor mom, don't wait too long!
    The World of Goregon
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    Have you ever imagined a world where people could live underwater and not ever have to come up for air? What about a place where people can fly without a giant machine. Tyler Adams never thought a world...
  • Mr. Enort
    4 years agoReply
    In this chapter---your character learns how to do a lot of new things---you continue to progress the plot---I like how you add in a bit of humor here and there.
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    Have you ever imagined a world where people could live underwater and not ever have to come up for air? What about a place where people can fly without a giant machine. Tyler Adams never thought a world...
  • Mr. Enort
    4 years agoReply
    I really like the way you added in your birthstone/astrological sign project---the plot is moving along quite nicely
    The World of Goregon
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    Have you ever imagined a world where people could live underwater and not ever have to come up for air? What about a place where people can fly without a giant machine. Tyler Adams never thought a world...
  • Mr. Enort
    4 years agoReply
    Things are moving fast---I like it! In a short story it's good to get the action going immediately
    The World of Goregon
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    Have you ever imagined a world where people could live underwater and not ever have to come up for air? What about a place where people can fly without a giant machine. Tyler Adams never thought a world...
  • Mr. Enort
    4 years agoReply
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    So you're getting married? This was a fun story to read == nice work
    Mission Impossible
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    This was the moment. It was her chance to go out into this world. Thoughts of Impossiblities remained in corners of her mind. This was the part of her that wasn't sure about this plan, but it was worth...
    anonanon
    4 years ago
    Thanks Mr. Enort~A.K.A~Mrs.Trone..
    Such an AWESOME SNEGLISH teacher!!
    <3 :)
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