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"Everyone's got a life, few got love, and very few got a guitar as well."

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  • And we meet. Finally.
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  • mkm
    4 years agoReply
    The part-1 of chapter 1 needs to be edited and made in sync with other parts. Other parts have been composed nicely. I think you'd need to work editing your part-1 a little, that's all. Looking forward to read more of this.

    I will get over her. Somehow.Manav. He loved Neha, but Neha was already in a relationship with Deb. Deb, that son of bitch, happened to study in the same college as Manav. Neha loved...
    <-- This is my new movella. I hope you'd read and give it a feedback sometime. Regards, from a fellow writer.
    When We Love
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    THEY FELL IN LOVE DESPITE THE RULES Chrissie Taylor received a scholarship to The Cornwall Academy in Charleston. Her parents are happy and proud, and her father privately says that now she won’t have...
  • mkm
    4 years agoReply
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    Great start to this one. Looking forward to new chapters here.

    "You know *you're* wasting your money...." Sorry but couldn't help notice use of 'your' instead of 'you're' here.

    I will get over her. Somehow.Manav. He loved Neha, but Neha was already in a relationship with Deb. Deb, that son of bitch, happened to study in the same college as Manav. Neha loved...
    <---that's my new movella. Hoping you'd go through sometime soon. Regards, from a fellow writer. :)
    Anything can happen
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    Melanie never liked One Direction. Liam never believed in love at first sight. But Anything can happen in one night.
  • mkm
    4 years agoReply
    Beautiful way to propose someone. Hat's off for thinking off such a thing and penning it down. I'm looking forward to see more of your works.
    This one's almost a perfect piece, but you'd never to check your grammar at places. One tiny suggestion: When mumbling or thinking inside your head, and you're writing it in your write-up, either italicize it, or keep them in single quotes (if you are using double quotes in your spoken sentences).

    I will get over her. Somehow.Manav. He loved Neha, but Neha was already in a relationship with Deb. Deb, that son of bitch, happened to study in the same college as Manav. Neha loved...
    <--- This is my new movella. Do check it sometime. Regards from a fellow writer :)
    7 Tokens of Love
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    Taking a walk in the woods, Rainey finds a pink balloon. What the balloon will say, or where it will lead, not even Rainey knows.
  • mkm
    4 years agoReply
    This could be a lot better. You'd need to work on your grammar, if not to perfect the piece, to at least give the write-up a good flow. And please, do use paragraphs and make sentences. This seems a little clumsy. I'm sure your new chapter updates would be better than the beginning. Looking forward. :)

    I will get over her. Somehow.Manav. He loved Neha, but Neha was already in a relationship with Deb. Deb, that son of bitch, happened to study in the same college as Manav. Neha loved...
    <-- My new movella. If you want to, do check it out sometime.
    New Guy
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    Corey was born in a large town in canada she was always being hit on or asked out she never said yes she only settled for people with good looks and big wallets.When she found out Justin Bieber was in...
  • mkm
    5 years agoReply
    this is good work.
    But i would ask you to edit one little thing though. in the beginning u asked a question to start with the story. "have you...." you should end it with a '?' not '.'. Maybe it was just a honest error. :)

    Do check my new movella. Category: Romance, titled: when it rained love. Hope i will get some good feedbacks here :)
    Battles
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    A new girl at school is just the person Jane is looking for. Margaret wont be safe. Will the narrator be able to save Margaret? Or will Margaret fall? Find out by reading Battles!
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