FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 4 Mar 13Age 20Last online 1 years ago

I am in fact a quite weird person who loves to write fantasy and adventure so if you enjoyed that sort of thing please, read my Movellas! XD Thank you very muchly for reading and peace!

  • MissCrazyDinosaur
    I like how you've started the prologue, the way you've explained the setting really well and you've left me wondering what had happened for her wanting to do that (I can't even say it, I'm that squimish!) Its made me think up all these different things that could have happened and because I scrolled back up to see what category it was in it only left me trying to figure out even more what's going to happen. I like stories which leave the reader wondering questions like, "Why did she smile before the train hit?" or "Who is Carey and why is she apologizing?"
    Great start and I will definitely be reading more!
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    When Corey's sister commits suicide, his family is distraught. Ten years on, and the hole she left still hasn't healed over. The unanswered question remains: why did she decide to die? Soon her secret...
    tashajjayne
    4 years ago
    Thank you very much!
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