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  • MisFire
    2 years agoReply
    I get the idea u want to show to readers and the plot some what but not only is it shirt but it seems to be missing the little details like a paraphrased version of when or how they fell in love. Also u look like u forget the vampire traits she's supposed to have not only her gift.
    Twilight: A Jacob And Renesmee Love Story
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    For the Twilight Competition, would mean so much if you liked and favourited it :D Bella and Edward are happily married and their little Renesmee is all grown up. The only thing Bella and Edward don't...
  • MisFire
    2 years agoReply
    Um doesn't their child have half vamp abilities. Why does Jacob have to catch her when she jumps out the window? Won't she survive, that's what mainly confuses me.
    Twilight: A Jacob And Renesmee Love Story
    Twilight: A Jacob...
    190
    27.1k
    73
    For the Twilight Competition, would mean so much if you liked and favourited it :D Bella and Edward are happily married and their little Renesmee is all grown up. The only thing Bella and Edward don't...
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