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Too complicated

  • mirmir
    4 years agoReply
    Oh please update!!
    How I killed Michelle
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    A 78 year old's story of how she killed her best friend when she was fourteen and got away with it. Also a bit of a romance.
  • mirmir
    4 years agoReply
    You should add on. Make it a book. It was great!
    A Shattered Mirror
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    This is my entry for the Movellas "Secrets" competition! :) -Everyone has secrets. Everyone has memories. Everyone has a past. Often times, all three come back to haunt us. Seventeen-year-old Tallulah...
  • mirmir
    4 years agoReply
    You need to write more than a flashback chapter. Write a whole book. It sounds good so far. But one thing people don't just say hey then have sex.
    14 and pregnant
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    Bella had a wonderful life. In till one night. Bella goes to a party and dose something you think no 14 year old would do. She lose it all gets kicked out. Leaves with her boyfriend. Read to find out the...
    mirmir
    4 years ago
    Oh okay that makes more sense. Sorry.
  • mirmir
    4 years agoReply
    You need to add more. I've already gotten into it
    Dark Secrets!
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    Rose Lee was never the type of girl who made many girl friends, she was always around boys. Riding skateboards, playing video games and hanging out at the arcade. Rose Lee is a a normal tomboy teen, you...
    Infinit3Lov3
    4 years ago
    Ya, I will update now :)
  • mirmir
    4 years agoReply
    I think you should keep it it krissys POV because it has been in her POV the whole time but you really need to update more often! It is an amazing book!!
    Daddy Won't See
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    SEQUEL TO DADDY WON'T KNOW You all know Krissy and Colton's story but you have never read them like this. Meet the new Krissy, or as everyone now calls her Evans, at her new boarding school. She's the...
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