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My name is Sabitha, and I am currently seventeen years old. I have always loved writing and I still do. Writing and reading are my passion. I want to be a writer in the future.

  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    1 Like
    I love the introduction of the characters at the start, so we can see how the author pictures the character to see if it is similar to how we think the characters look like. I love Phoenix, I don't know why, but perhaps the build up to her appearance, I can't wait for her to make an entrance. I can't wait to read more.
    Celebrity High: The Next Generation
    Celebrity High:...
    *Sort of a sequel to Celebrity High* It has been 30 years since 5 Seconds of Summer has gone to Celebrity High and now it's their kids turn. There is going to be heartbreak. Love. And even friendship along...
    Beautifully Musical Nerd
    I'm still working on the next chapter :)
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    Aww, poor Liyah, she is so cute, love her name it is beautiful. Also, I love the flashback, since it allows us to understand more about the past. The intense chemistry between Louis and Liyah, is so cute and realistic. I can't wait to read more.
    The Bad Boy's Good Girl
    The Bad Boy's Good...
    "Harry?" "Yes Liyah?" "Is that you on the TV with the gun." Harry sighed, "Yes. Yes it is." -------------------------------------- Liyah Brown is your average 17-year-old nerd. She has thick-rimmed...
    BabyGirlBooo ❤️
    Um wow....
    Thank you for the feedback xx
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    Great plot. The plot is different in a good way, since it makes the reader want to read more. To improve, when your writing names like Harry, you need to capitalise his name. Plus, to make the story more real and interesting, you could add description of the setting.
    Harry's Last Gift
    Harry's Last Gift
    (One Direction Fanfic) Madison Is a 20 year old professional doctor that gets an emergency call to operate on 1 person who has been severally hurt during a flight crash. He and 4 other boys were also...
    Lady Jane
    1 months ago
    Thank you for the comment, after i finish i will be sure to go back and edit as well as starting on your advise now. :)
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    *Happy Dance* I was so happy when I saw Label's sequel Changes was written. @[oh hipsta please] what can I say? Your writing style is beautiful, and I love how real Raegan is, she isn't the stereotypical girl, she's beautiful, kind and different. I love when I see a character just like her. The plot is great, and the quotes are great. I love the Oscar Wilde quote at the start. Also, I love the cover for Changes, it is just gorgeous.
    "This isn't the end, it's the beginning of a whole new chapter. We just have to learn to define ourselves this time around." | Happily ever afters are just the beginnings of new stories, at least that's...
    oh hipsta please
    3 weeks ago
    Thank you so much for your kind words! :)
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    I love this story. I can't believe Valerie parents just dumped her in the orphanage, the pain she must feel of missing her brother is something the reader can feel. Also, by having the different P.O.V it allows us to understand how the character feels about a specific event, such as how Ashton worries about Valerie. Also, I like how you made her rants bold, to emphasize the effect of the words on her.
    A Life of Problems [5SOS Fanfiction]
    A Life of Problems...
    Valerie Smith feels that the world has abandoned her. With her life a mess, she's pretty much given up. But what happens when four guys walk into her life. Will Valerie's life ever change for the better. *Warning:...
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