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My name is Sabitha, and I am currently seventeen years old. I have always loved writing and I still do. Writing and reading are my passion. I want to be a writer in the future.

  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    I love how you repeated the first line to emphasize its importance. Cute poem, love how we hear the speakers voice.
    Heart of Glass
    Heart of Glass
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    Poetry about love :)
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    1 Like
    Lovely, I love the layout of your piece.I especially like the last line, it's great how you showed love failure from a guys perspective.
    In The Name Of Love.
    In The Name Of Lov...
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    He told me it was going to hurt. He told me we were going to regret it. At the time, I didn't regret it, But now- I do. I was a mosaic used to being shattered Putting myself back together But I...
    TheLonelyCakeSlice
    Thank you so much!! <33 I'm glad you enjoyed it
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    Wonderful. I love the vary in your sentence structure. It's great, I love how you showcase the feeling of love. I think, it would have been better if instead of it as one big paragraph, you should perhaps split it into two paragraphs so it's easier to read.
    The Heart Break
    The Heart Break
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    The tradition is haunting, in a way. Giving your heart to the person you love. But I'll still do it. I have to.
  • Sabitha.K
    1 months agoReply
    Beautiful poem. I absolutely love your poem, it's so emotional and truly wonderful. Love it.
    A Rose to the Heart
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    For the "Heartbroken" writing competition.
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