FemaleBangladeshMember since 19 Jul 12Age 20Last online 5 years ago

  • Meridien
    5 years agoReply
    You are dead cool
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    when rowan princess of the lost kingdom realises goradeen is not her true home she is determind to find her fate but where?
  • Meridien
    5 years agoReply
    Really good story Knife, good to see your sentence construction, grammar and punctuation is getting better. I am really interested to see how the story progresses.
    I think one day i will be buying a book with your name on on it
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    when rowan princess of the lost kingdom realises goradeen is not her true home she is determind to find her fate but where?
    knife
    5 years ago
    thankyou fantasys my favourite genre so I guess I have learnt from the writing style and I'm glad you think my grammar and stuff is improving :)
  • Meridien
    5 years agoReply
    Really good story Knife
    A little difficult to read because of punctuation and grammar etc, could do with more clearly defined sentences and paragraphs.
    That being said i am really looking forward to reading the next instalment and i think if you wrote this as a full book or Novella you would be able to get published.
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    Saturday 31st July 2012 I wake up early at 5 am as I had the DREAM again I look at the clock exactly 5 am Saturday 31 July 2012 not only the dreaded day but exactly the TIME of my birthday there always...
    knife
    5 years ago
    thankyou so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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