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  • MeMina

    Correct this help pls :)

    5 years agoReply
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    I'm a highschool student and i have an essay i want to correct, can anyone help me? I would be more then thankfull.

    This short story consist some symbols, the first symbol is the heart which symbolize the main characters love stories, but it depends on which heart it is. The real heart represent the true love with emotions, the mechanic heart is cold and doesn’t represent love and emotions.
    The second symbol is the rental heart place, which is like a true friend for the main character because whenever he/she needs to recover faster and get more support that ‘’friend’’ is there for the main character to help. The rental heart place also becomes livelier when the main character needs the place the most; ‘’After a while, the heart rental guy started to greet me by name. He gave me a bulk discount and I got invited to his Christmas party’’(p.3, l.73-74).
    tallulahflanjee
    5 years ago
    Is it that passage you want help with??
    This short story contains some symbols, the first a heart which symbolizes the main character's love stories. The real heart represents the true love whereas the mechanical heart is cold and doesn't represent love or emotions. (Here I'd go on to explain how the mechanical represents artificial love as it's been made and how the cold hard metal reflects the love or the characters involved in the romance).
    Another metaphorical symbol is the rental heart place, which represents the true friend of the main character as whenever he/she needs to recover or get moral support that "friend" is there. etc. Try to get in some quotes too... Hope this helps :)
  • MeMina

    Correct this help pls :)

    5 years agoReply
    Hello everybody

    I'm a highschool student and i have an essay i want to correct, can anyone help me? I would be more then thankfull.

    This short story consist some symbols, the first symbol is the heart which symbolize the main characters love stories, but it depends on which heart it is. The real heart represent the true love with emotions, the mechanic heart is cold and doesn’t represent love and emotions.
    The second symbol is the rental heart place, which is like a true friend for the main character because whenever he/she needs to recover faster and get more support that ‘’friend’’ is there for the main character to help. The rental heart place also becomes livelier when the main character needs the place the most; ‘’After a while, the heart rental guy started to greet me by name. He gave me a bulk discount and I got invited to his Christmas party’’(p.3, l.73-74).
    Tohpi
    5 years ago
    I need to take a look at the verbs in 3rd person they should end on a -s :)
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