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I'm 14, my biggest loves are writing, animals and music. I love one direction and Justin Bieber, I don't care if you don't like them.

  • Meggy12
    4 years agoReply
    Aw thank you Louise, the second chapter is nearly finished x
    Hobie
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    Prim's life is far from normal. Her relationship with her parents gets worse by the day, and it doesn't help with the fact she always has her younger siblings on her back. She has dreams, dreams...
  • Meggy12
    4 years agoReply
    How many children are there, because there is four names, and the mother says she has two. Also I would check your tenses, you go in and out of two different ones
    Remaining Hidden
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    Everyone knows about the holocaust when Hitler and many others killed innocent Jews including many children. This is for the historical fiction competition. Where my story is about a family, a family of...
    Sabitha.K
    4 years ago
    Two children, Peter and Chana are the parents. Okay, will go over it. Thanks for reading and the feedback.
  • Meggy12
    4 years agoReply
    The news paper entry I really good. I like the way you use witnesses. I would just check threw the prologue as I think there Is a few mistakes. But other than that its really good.
    The butterfly effect
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    In 2013 best friends Helena and Xanthe are trying to get a place at a brilliant University and enjoy their last year living at home. In 2025 primary school teacher Chris Stirling is worried about his Wife;...
  • Meggy12
    4 years agoReply
    I've only read the first chapter, but it's really good, it paints a picture in your head
    Finding Liam
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    After being mistreated by her father her whole life, Lauren is sent with her siblings to Ireland to live with their aunt and uncle whilst her father is sentenced for the abuse. Her cousin Ciara gets her...
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