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  • The story behide the girl and the new boy
    The story behide...
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    by Mari14
  • Mari14
    5 years agoReply
    this is really good! update please!
    Greta's Love Experience
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    Greta lives in an abusive house hold. When one lucky day she spotted by her crush, he saves her from a hit to the face. Later that day she is kicked out of the house because of the act alone. ...
    Nicole Paige
    5 years ago
    Thank you:) I will be writing some tonight so lets say tomorrow there will be an update :))
  • Mari14
    5 years agoReply
    this is really good please update!
    He broke my heart... But it don't breakeven
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    Alex is a girl who falls in love with a boy called Edward. He knows exactly what she feels for him and still took her heart with both hands and crushed it. Alex doesn't think she will ever get over this...
  • Mari14
    5 years agoReply
    Very nice poem! i really liked it. I like the visual language you gave and i also liked the way you describe the girl and devil. you have a great talent keep the good work up!
    Hallows Eve
    Hallows Eve
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    A poem about Karma taking its toll on people who deserve it. For the Halloween competition.
    Bells Hunter
    5 years ago
    Thanks for the feedback :)
    angel2012
    5 years ago
    I love it. The kind of stuff, I really get into. Well written and love the details.
    Bells Hunter
    5 years ago
    Wow thanks!
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