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About me huh, well i'm British & unemployed that university failed me to better my career options.

I studied CG animation, which is an amazing fun pointless course, towards the end i found that i was better at being an ideas guy rather than an animator.

So i decided (for better & worse) to write a young adult cartoon series on what i wanted to write that i felt hasn't been seen before. Although i realise now that this story & the reasons why it hasn't quite been done before is simply because it's for an acquired taste/audience. I couldn't sell it to a studio & i would have to rewrite it be a novel or comic book.

So i heard of this website & my friends keep on saying more people need to read what i've written. I don't consider my self smart enough to write a novel but in a way a script isn't too different.

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    mumbled "update"

    5 years agoReply
    Well i've been gone for a while, a mixture of being made redundant, xmas and what not. atm i've been making my world map it's slowly taking shape got all the main land mass done but will add cities & mountains etc soon.

    For the story-wise i've had one of my infamous rethinks, at one point i was thinking of writing a bastardise version of a film script but in the end with help from a friend who just simply said. "You've got all these great ideas, why not making them episodic rather than limit my self to said number of episodes per season".

    So i've decided to take his advice and greatly expand on the characters/history/culture of the world as in my 2nd saga things got very crammed very quickly due to those issues above. Even though i had 26parts in the first saga i will probably expand that to over 30 with plenty of new ideas & jokes & secondary characters back stories flooding in.
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    mumbled "Chapter 4 & 5 upload"

    5 years agoReply
    I didn't think it was possible but movella's said my latest script was too big so i had divide them up so about 30script pages is all it can handle oh well, easier read.

    Yea it turns out i was too tired last night to even realise i wasn't close to finishing these chapters, made too many silly errors & at the very end had 3 near identical conversations all happening at the same time with the same characters lol. been working on this including the extra 2odd hours to upload it to be even remotely readable, not even had dinner yet and its 12:30am :S

    I just hope this rewrite has paid off because so much silly banter was removed to try & fill in a early plot hole to why Baz never really gave a damn about finding if Mary entered Eva with him or even survived the castle explosions. but again Conrad was never really in the first book much, he just jumped in & out but i wanted him much more involved like he is in the 2nd book.

    Yet also i really wanted to make Tanya more of the sympathetic character that she is & have her get over Baz ruining her life. The only problem with this rewrite is that chapter 6 with the reintroduction of Sean (the gay elf bastard wizard) now that Conrad is in it more as originally he never comes back till chapter 13.

    And chapter 9 will have the introduction of the last main character Virginia -- She's very special being the most stupid Selkie witch has to offer.

    So what to expect in chapter 6 other than Sean stealing those Crystals from our bumbling adventurers, well Conrad will certainly get a proper introduction now things have relaxed & Tanya explains what it is like to be her & i might write in a hint to why Conrad knows Tanya & importantly to not let Baz find out but you will have to wait a short while before any more mythical creatures show up (actually the next one i made up)

    Hope you guys like Chapter 4 & 5
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    mumbled "Chapter 4 rewrite"

    5 years agoReply
    I hope to upload chapter/ep 4 tomorrow, i've just finished writing it up listening to genesis the band (makes me sound older than i am) this chapter plays out completely different to what i've now done, essentially it was more Baz being stupid to the events that have now have happened, originally it was about Baz getting withdrawl from not having cigarettes but after looking at it, i wanted Tanya to be more open.

    The poker game to come was to get Baz some more smokes that leaded to the big fight with the dwarf, but the biggest problem & surprisingly people never mentioned what happened to Mary when she was in the same car with Baz, there is a lot hidden about Mary & even Baz but i thought with this new rewrite (despite removing a lot of comedy) will put that straight let alone logical

    Even though Mary is mentioned a bit in the story, she still holds a powerful side to Baz & Tanya's relationship in small pieces. But this episode in general was to spike the hero in Baz & originally was done justice but now is done with different reasons by making Mary more important as person & Tanya since the end of chap 3 to realise that there is more to Baz than she thought

    however this ep does counter Baz's moral understanding yet giving Tanya to portray her own personality that is stated in chap 1.

    All i will say there is many questions in this story & most won't be answered to the end but its the enjoyment of these characters being together that i think is worth the ride. (sorry for my lazy grammar tonight)
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    5 years agoReply
    The truth behind this post of this script was that a bunch of friends of mine are trying to animate a script of what i recently wrote, but the lead animator has some word doc problems to open the original file so i posted it here so he could easily access it -- We honestly didn't expect anyone to read it, let alone comment on it -- yet you did & we are grateful that you like it -- Thank you x
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    mumbled "Well i took long enough"

    5 years agoReply
    Not that any one reads this or is coming back for more chapters i guess i should apologise to those who hypothetically are for the late release of chapter 3, the main reason just trying to cheer my self up being jobless by playing video games.

    I always used to think that this chapter was probably my weakest stories but after going through it i pretty much enjoyed it with the new added tweaks to the script. Not much was changed other than Conrad's encounter with the gunslinger who originally (Need to tweak chapter 2 now) was a swordsman & before that actually had a partner in the hunting business. the reason why i changed him to a gunslinger was to put more emphasis that my version of elves like their gadgets but surprisinly in the change i removed some dialogue that actually describes the difference to say the more popular copy & paste tolkien elves.

    I also removed a scene where the public are shouting at a police station talking about Tanya/Pudding even though i thought the scene was fun & silly it was a easy choice to cut. I also but a brief background to the Roka Ogre character, it wasn't necessary but after writing in the meat chair gag i felt obliged to.

    The end of this chapter is essentially the beginning of Baz & Tanya's friendship that was seen in chapter 1. I could have written chapter 3 end a bit better but i guess i was forcing my self to end the chapter. Chapter 4 explores a more character background for Baz & Tanya. i will probably mish mash elements of chapter 5 into 4 which might be a nightmare to write.

    I think the most disappointing thing about chapter 3 is that Conrad's character changes throughout the book to a more serious character than this fun adventurer, he was always a guy who jumped in & out of the story but with this new draft i hope to have him in much more chapters.
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