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An aspiring young author with a passion for words and writing :)

  • M.W Rose
    4 years agoReply
    Wow so much tension! You have a real talent:)
    Alienated and Dying
    Alienated and Dyin...
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    We alienated ourselves from the help of the others, the other planets. Now orange fog looms over the surface of the earth. The air is dusty, and the humans are in hiding. A few days remain before we burn;...
    cassidynmc
    4 years ago
    Thanks so much! Means a lot :)
  • M.W Rose
    4 years agoReply
    Stop indenting at every new paragraph books don't do that but an interesting read to be quite honest :)
    Good Girls Don't
    Good Girls Don't
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    So it's in Devon, right? Devon. Cold place. Farms and British grit and all. Devon, and a romance. In secondary school. First between two girls. Then between a girl and a girl masquerading as a boy. Then,...
    MuseOD
    4 years ago
    Okay, I'll take that into consideration. Thanks.
  • M.W Rose
    4 years agoReply
    Love the detail its really gripping :) more please xx
    Isn't it funny?
    Isn't it funny?
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    For the Young writer of the year competition, these are the first three chapters for the competition, if you'd like more email me madeleineflint@hotmail.co.uk- My formatting is fucked in places as I'm...
    Maddie.
    4 years ago
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    Thanks muchly, chapter three is on it's way :P xx
  • M.W Rose
    4 years agoReply
    Very gripping well done! More please :)
    Thieving
    Thieving
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    From a normal persons point of view, Tom is just your average 16 year old boy. But to his associates, he is the key to getting rich.
  • M.W Rose
    4 years agoReply
    Flows really well, good work!:) more pleaseeeeee
    That's life.
    That's life.
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    This is story about a girl, a boy, and the person that stands between them. It's about a brother, a useless aunt and a missing dad. It's about an overworked Mum, a twin and 7 year old that grew up too...
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