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Hey there! My name is Cassidie and I'm 15. I'm a coffee addicted, horse lover, Whovian and Lovatic. In my free time, I'm reading, blogging (I have a YA book review blog, you can see it it here: http://rebook424.blogspot.com), writing, going to dance lessons. Have a great time!

  • Dara Quinn
    3 years agoReply
    It's so sad, but brilliant. It's not easy to depict a frenzied person, but you've done greatly. The only thing I noticed that how did she know she had a son? Nobody told her yet. Anyways, your style and execution are really awesome. :)
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    We were meant to be together, mother and son. But you took him from me. He's dead. It's your fault. Why should someone so powerful, so kind, so caring, see it fit to simply throw away a life like it was...
    Dara Quinn
    3 years ago
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    Your welcome. :)
    Yes, in our heads it often seems to be different, because we know what happens, but the reader does not, so we have to yield them with it even if it's obvious to us. So in conclusion, yes you should add it somehow.
    Only a suggestion: it would even be enough to have one of those exclamations, you know when they say in fully delight: "It's a boy." Of course it's just an evanescent idea, you out it as you wish. :)
    Dara Quinn
    3 years ago
    I see. :) Good luck to the competition. :)
    Dara Quinn
    3 years ago
    I was thinking about it, but in the end I decided not to. I had an idea, pretty different from the usual, but it didn't work out so I chose to concentrate on Between the Devil and the Deep Blue See competition instead. I'm about to type it in. :)
  • Dara Quinn

    mumbled "Save My World update"

    3 years agoReply
    Some minor corrections have been made in the first three chapter of my novel. Despite the fact that they are not too big changes, I think they made the style a lot better, but check it out yourself! ;)
    Save My WorldIn 2053 New York is in its ruins and robots prowling up and down on the streets. This happens when people think they are ready but indeed they are not....
  • Dara Quinn
    3 years agoReply
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    This is so nice and unique. I like it. :)
    Letters to a Pixie *On hold*
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    This is the story of a lost girl, one who doesn't know how to even find herself. She turns to writing letters to no one, but expects and answer. Better yet, wants and answer. As she writes her first letter,...
  • Dara Quinn
    3 years agoReply
    OMG I'm a runner-up. I would never have thought. :O It made my entire month. (Let's say the next, because there's so little left from this.) :D
  • Dara Quinn
    3 years agoReply
    Hi! Could you please take a look at my Divergent fan-fiction 'All the Same'? It would be much appreciated. Thank you!
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    I've seen a lot of people do this so I'll give it a try. More details in the first chapter
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    Of course
    Dara Quinn
    3 years ago
    Thank you. :)
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