FemaleCanadaMember since 5 Aug 13Age 17Last online 7 months ago

Welcome to the merciless abyss as to which I have found myself trapped in for the last 3/4 years.

16 years old and have started to procure an unnatural amount of books in my room

Writing growth has been stunted because I never realized you actually had to do work in high school. Whoops

Determined to be the biggest procrastinator and yet have an insatiable need to whine about not writing enough

Press dat follow button to boost my morale and hopefully keep myself from studying so much and caring about school. Who needs dat shit anyways?

lol jk my parents would kill me just follow me

and like

and favorite one of my books

yeah

k love u

I am also on Wattpad, same name and all. Hit me up there if u want to

  • LuxDarian

    mumbled "6 months...."

    1 years agoReply
    Tis been another 6 months of silence from a pretty inactive writer and i apologize for that. But Pick Your Poison has been updated and lets be honest, it may be another 6 months until I have legit time to write again. But I hope you enjoy while I'm here :)
  • LuxDarian
    2 years agoReply
    Heyo!

    I love this prologue, It's pretty unique! :)

    I found that the blurb was a bit too mysterious, a clearer idea of the story will help you get readers and pull them into the interesting prologue. You had also switched tenses, so just be mindful of that for your coming chapters and just pick a tense that's easiest to stick with and/or you are more comfortable with :)

    Your cover is pretty cool btw, it's a great eye-catcher!

    I think you have a pretty solid start, and I think you can make a pretty intersting story out of this...

    Good luck with the coming chapters!
    Nebraska
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    Adriana was always the outspoken figure in the background until she met the boy with the sun kissed skin and the hidden identity that one summer. He was all she could've ever wished for but He was from...
    _emilykaye_
    2 years ago
    Thank you! (:
  • LuxDarian
    2 years agoReply
    Hiiiii

    I really liked the story so far, although a little more description will go a long way! You're really good at capturing a readers attention! Your sentences are a tad bit messy with commas, so just make sure to be careful with them (I myself have a bit of a problem with commas also :$) and don't be afraid to write longer sentences!!! I don't know if you're just trying to avoid run-on sentences, but some more descriptive and lengthened sentences will give you a better flow in the story :)

    Alright! Other than those few things, I think you've got loads of potential, especially with the unique plot. I hope I helped, love!
    Hoist The Colours **Unedited Spelling Mistakes**
    Hoist The Colours...
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    I only have a limited amount of time to tell you this dear readers. I am Morrow. I am sixteen. And I'm a pirate. (Awesome cover by Lady Tatertot! Go check out her cover shop, guys! That is, after you're...
    LuxDarian
    2 years ago
    No worries, and alright! :)
  • LuxDarian

    Anyone up for a Snow White re-telling? Swaps Welcome!

    2 years agoReply
    I have two books up, if anyone's interested in doing a swap or just checking either one of them out, that'd be cool! Idk how to link them here but just check out my profile and stuff.....thanks!
    LuxDarian
    2 years ago
    A Girl Named Winter*Runner up of the Be Inspired By The Christmas Picture Contest* When Max meets a mysterious girl in the woods, he finds that not only does she change...
    LuxDarian
    2 years ago
    Oh loll figured it out XD
    Pick Your PoisonLeah Seyl, a member of a group of elite guards recruited to protect the King and Queen of Laverna, is feeling defeated. For three years she had protect...
    Mirlotta
    2 years ago
    I'd be happy to do a CC swap! Tell me if you're still up for it :)
    Whisper//He had a smile on his face like the climax of a novel, and his kisses were the chorus to a treasured favourite song.\\ Benedict has lived six months...
  • LuxDarian

    mumbled "Here I am, 15 years old and still weird af"

    2 years agoReply
    After a pretty frick-frackin long hiatus, I have decided to come back and re-vamp Pick Your Poison like I had previously promised to do. I hope you enjoy it! I will be posting updates soon.....
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