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“But I don’t want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, or you wouldn’t have come here.”
― Alice in Wonderland, Cheshire Cat

[About Me] (Pendulum <3) [Insanity, Deceased - Started Madness]
and I love Music, I Create Music, DubStep,Pop,and more...
I love reading some stories and FanFiction is my fav
:: Depression Is The Key :: - COMING SOON! -
:: The Last Ones Remaining ::

I have always wanted to write this, Planning it was difficult, I had to write more chapters my other Movellas and then concentrate on three things at once. Finally I can start the Trilogy =)

Writing is not just a hobby, I love writing about stories which have a unique feel. Some stories that are written to make the reader feel inspired - that is one of the benefits of writing, you pass on your knowledge. Helping others - Something I'm strong with. Have a great Christmas 2013 :3

[Competition Runner-Up: Don't Say Her Name] (Winner)
[The Chemical Brothers] The Generation Of Weirdness :3

- Luke J.R -

The Future Is Dead? "I Feel Like Such A Proud Mom" XD (Stupid)


I've seriously got to ask why some of us are still here. Oh, I know why- but I sure don't wish to find out.

- Daily Blogs Coming To You By Luke J.R -

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    Going to write a review on this tomorrow! C:
    A Universe Trapped in a Labyrinth
    A Universe Trapped...
    This is my boring and interesting and teenager life spanning from age 15 to 18 (and hopefully beyond). Within you'll find many re-inventions of myself, boy trouble, school trouble and life trouble....
    Early Autumn Walk -
    Truly a beautiful poem that really gets the message across right away. The use of a tree described as still & showing it doesn't care is interesting because you have added an emotion / action that this inanimate object is doing but in reality it's something that we never really take much notice of. We just see it as a 'boring old tree' or 'beautiful tree but boring'.

    Again with mixing a fantasy description into reality. This is a part where many of us can relate because we more than likely do take notice of the sky & admire the trees around us. Light in segments was something I could imagine in my mind.

    Then you end with the 'wishful thinking' & I love how you express your emotions through using inanimate objects. The last line: "Taste their wispiness" was a perfect touch. I'd say that its what made me smile at the end.

    Sky Scrapers - It's weird how I had to tilt my head to read this one but maybe that's the effect you are trying to give us readers? Well, if it is an accient & you didn't mean for it to look like that. (I actually feel it makes your poem stand out even more with it rather than without it)
    I really enjoyed this one too! I did feel as if the first one somehow was more relatable. But Sky Scrapers still made me feel something, and I think that's what counts; the feeling & emotion.

    Great work writing these two poems! I look forward to reading more of your work soon!

    - L x
    P O E T R Y
    P O E T R Y
    A collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title. I write in a fast mind-flow kind of way, that hopefully...
    Jasmine Green
    1 weeks ago
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    Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you like the fantasy included with the reality, I love writing in an abstract way to represent certain things.
    Yeah skyscrapers is meant to be like that haha, it's meant to look like skyscrapers in a city... :)
    anyway thanks, means a lot that people feel things when reading my writing!
    J x
    1 weeks ago
    @[Jasmine Green] Anytime! (I sent you a message via the PM system on Movellas, I look forward to your reply)- Writing in an abstract way is always great to see! Skyscrapers was interesting, but it didn't hold my attention for too long. (It's not for everyone I guess) but I like how you made it look like a city... In all honesty I kind of had a feeling you did it for creative reasons, I was just preparing myself to feel bad incase I got it wrong... :)
    anytime, I love your work so far! I can't wait to read more!
    L x
    Jasmine Green
    1 weeks ago
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    Okay cool :) Yeah, I get that it's not for everybody, poetry is very like that!
    Thanks x


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    Just keeping everyone up-to-date on The Little Girl, a story that I can't wait to share more with you all. CH.1 recieved some incredible feedback, reviews that just made me smile & be thankful for everything I've managed to achieve & gain on Movellas. It's also again time to thank the wonderful ever-growing Community! Honestly, the Movellas Community is amazing! The Best Community I have ever been a part of. So, I'll be writing something for all my fans & supporters tomorrow! I'll also be writing a Huge Thank You to the Movellas Community (sometime this week) !

    If you haven't checked it out already, I highly recommend you to try readind this story: (even if it isn't your cup of tea / something you would never be interested in reading)
    The Little GirlThe Little Girl's Origins - Hidden away in a crawlspace lies her memories, fractured, damaged, no longer in use. A tall man once visited her when all the...

    *** REMINDER for FANS & REVIEWERS & Movellas Community ***
    @[Chrissy Sky] CH.2 is finally here! (I'll be fixing the grammatical errors I find or others find soon)
    @[Jasmine Green] CH.2 may be creepiest, but it is full of story & information that is vital.
    @[Naz.Cris] CH.2 is here! I look forward to your review / feedback C:
    @[Lily Anna] CH.2 is finally here! Looking forward to you reading it & sharing your thoughts.
    @[Katie Pharoah] CHAPTER 2 is HERE! (Sorry for the tag, I just wanted to let you know)
    @[AnimeAffinity] Looking forward to your review / comment on CH.2 C: (It's here!)
    @[Miss G] CH.2 is here !!! <3
    The Little Girl
    The Little Girl
    The Little Girl's Origins - Hidden away in a crawlspace lies her memories, fractured, damaged, no longer in use. A tall man once visited her when all the lights were off. Windows barricaded, outside people...
    Katie Pharoah
    1 weeks ago
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    I will make sure to check it out!
    1 weeks ago
    @[Katie Pharoah] Looking forward to it (:
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