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Pre-published author, math geek and all-round awkward turtle.
I love to read as well as write so if you read my works and give me feedback, I will return the favour.

  • Lucy Nation
    4 years agoReply
    I think this is good but i think there are some bits where the tone suddenly changes from serious to light and it seems a little inappropriate. Other than that, this is good and you should continue it. Keep Writing :D
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    Morgan, a teen who life is messed up, she attempts suicide but it fails and dose she find love in the proses ? hey btw this Morgan character is practically based on me but older, and I have never attempted...
    MIKKI♥
    4 years ago
    thanks i'll work on it !
  • Lucy Nation
    4 years agoReply
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    Wow, i love this, it's amazing. You should definitely continue it. The beginning works really well and i love the idea that its all a dream, somehow it just makes it more real. The dialogues and thought processes all seam really realistic, good job. Keep writing :D
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    Everyone's heard of dozens of different kinds of apocalypses. You've got your standard zombies, or maybe a slavering horde of vampires. Vengeful angels, mutant diseases. Governments and nukes. This...
    Ariadne Wight
    4 years ago
    Oh yeah, and I am actually actively working on this one, so I will try to keep posting as I write. (Be patient please, as I have about a dozen other stories I am also actively working on at the moment:)
    Lucy Nation
    4 years ago
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    I kinda figured it wasn't a dream really but I wasn't sure. Also I love convoluted back stories and plots as they keep me guessing. I might check out some of your other projects some other time, if they are half as good as this one I am bound to enjoy it . Good luck with your writing :D
    Ariadne Wight
    4 years ago
    Haha thanks! (And personally, I think that Mind Games and The Fallen are better, but that just might be because they are more fun to write:))
  • Lucy Nation
    4 years agoReply
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    I like the plot ideas to this so far but I think your work could benifit from you checking it over. There are a lot of parts where you have confused plural and non plural and used are instead of is. There also seems to be some suffix confusion. It may be easiest to get one of your friends to read it as often it can be hard to see your own mistakes.
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    Cassie Grant an all time student of Abigail Adam's High, no more than an ordinary kid but turns out to be fortunate one when a dare forced her climb an old tree house in the center of a forest where ancient...
    VemJ
    4 years ago
    Oh! But thanks anyway! I'm glad someone commented on my writing ^_^
  • Lucy Nation

    NOTONEDIRECTION

    4 years agoReply
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    Hi guys there's a new tag that i started using that is as above NotOneDirection. i hope you guys will start using, this way we can distinguish our works from the torrent of 1D.
    VemJ
    4 years ago
    :))) sure thing ... i would love to part
    Mina Rowen ☕
    4 years ago
    Good idea. I'll do that as well
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